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Eternal Is Your Dark Toll, I Have Songs Yet To Be Sung

Death is a vulture, its sharp talons dripping black and red
Rampages in all cultures, appetite very well fed
Noiseless it oft glides, even into healthiest people's beds
Nobody from its touch hides, as within Fate's path it treads!

O'death seek not this mortal soul, nor this body too young
Eternal is thy dark toll, I have songs yet to be sung!

Death in repose, I dare thee to walk surface of the sun
This dare I chose, as its heat may toast thy blackened buns
Such humor I send thy way, and with it no clever guile
Write I this today, hoping postpone thy visit a while!

O'death seek not this mortal soul, nor this body too young
Eternal is thy dark toll, I have songs yet to be sung!

If these words stay not thy hand, nor touch thy cold, frosted heart
I pray heart to withstand, needless worries on my sad part
So come as you are as you may, tis' but fated release
Bring steaks I'll pay, furnish even the pan and the grease!

O'death seek not this mortal soul, nor this body too young
Eternal is thy dark toll, I have songs yet to be sung!

Robert J. Lindley, 
Rhyme, ( A Conversation With Fate And Its Black Handed Ally )
Honoring Hopkins 

Note" The primary Hopkins poems that inspired these two poems, shown below, 

(1.) "I Wake And Feel The Fell Of Dark, Not Day" by Gerard Manley Hopkins

(2.) "Moonless darkness stands between" by Gerard Manley Hopkins

(3.) "Carrion Comfort"  by Gerard Manley Hopkins

(4.) " God's Grandeur"  by Gerard Manley Hopkins
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(5.) https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/gerard-manley-hopkins

(6.) https://poets.org/poet/gerard-manley-hopkins

(1.) First poem In Our Feasts, We Both Drank Lover's Wine Second poets tribute series third poet Gerard Manley Hopkins Blood that entices with its red-glow appeal Its bright warmth into a wanton soul seeks She that drove passion, ate my youthful zeal Relishing that my words, were soft and meek! Yet I, a victim lost and thus spellbound Wore blinded eyes and heard no chains's rattles Nor heard black-laced music's deep, darkest sound Hid in imprison heart, raging battles! There in nightmarish glee, her pleasures sought She her tortures relished and thus she sang Lover, thy soul my back-heart has now bought From misery, my deepest desires sprang! Yet I, in romantic delusion's maze Saw only her bright-cast angelic wings While pleading for more in a lustful haze Heard I, paradise calls, dark sirens sing! Hot blood flowed through my sacrificial veins Sensual lips kissed my hot-desires rose Only Love's blindness, can such lust explain Passions did leap, seeing her naked pose! Her romantic eyes shown to me as pearls And her smile, a beautiful angel's face Both causing me to forget other girls In dark state, all reality replace! In our feasts, we both drank lover's sweet wine she said, "share we sweet wines of divine Gods" Saw not, hers was blood-red, black as night mine As did her touch, lustful spirit so prod! Winter soon came, with its dark gloom and cold Yet from first snows revealing lights did shine Was then I saw, a monster's face so old And knew on my flesh, it did with gusto dine! Seeking help, to break her accursed spell Sought I, dedicated priest to help give That day, my story I did to him tell Begged him to free me so I could live! His true words, they woke a sad, dying soul Open eyes, this dark world begin to see It seeks to destroy, early death its goal Using its, dark she-demons such as she! By newfound faith, command it to depart Order it back to its hellish dark pits Say with faith, "I your black-curse tear apart" To your realm go, as so your kind befits! In a flash, sun again its bright rays sent Blinded eyes could now reality see Release came as dark lusts, I did repent As divine forgiveness had set me free! That joyful night, yellow moon again rose For the first time, in many darkened years In its light, a sweeter path I then chose On my knees, I gave thanks with falling tears! Robert J. Lindley, 11-15-2019 Rhyme, ( O' Darkness, Within Thy Black Curse I Was Once Imprisoned ) Second poets tribute series, third poet Gerard Manley Hopkins

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Date: 11/24/2019 11:44:00 PM
This poet is another favorite of mine. This is a fine tribute to his genius Robert! : ) xxoo
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Robert Lindley
Date: 11/28/2019 9:02:00 AM
Sorry my friend, I just now saw this comment. Thank you... So many here seems to not care about such poets, some perhaps too wrapped up into themselves as to think poetry and its rich inspiring history is of little or else tis of no importance. To me that is sad....
Date: 11/21/2019 2:36:00 AM
When I was young, a mate of mine gave me listen to a record of the Russian composer, Leonid Desyatnikov. There was a very strange song in English. It was like a gaze into the abyss. The combination of words and music sent me into a kind of trance. I've never felt anything like that before. It was Hopkins' poem. That's how I first met him. Your poem seemed to bring me back to the past, allowing me to relive that feeling which I did not know the name for. Now I know it. It was catharsis. P.S.: By the way, I googled a bit and found this song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0N4VTnxiLks Beware, it can hypnotize you)
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Date: 11/21/2019 7:14:00 AM
Thank you my friend, one must never gaze too long into the black cavernous clouds surrounding the abyss. I am delighted that my Hopkins tribute poem, scored a connection with you and your own very fine poetry! Yes, I watched the video and true it does create a trance-like state for those that truly see, hear and feel its somber vibes. Oft catharsis is good for the soul that needs its application ... God bless..
Date: 11/16/2019 12:31:00 PM
A soul was set free after treading dark paths.. meeting that fright that dwells deep inside.. filling the wide chambers of the heart with genuine a Faith and Light.. learning to forgive and being grateful for all the blessings.. "O'death seek not this mortal soul, nor this body too young.. Eternal is thy dark toll, I have songs yet to be sung!" Great deep lines! Dear Robert, a treat to read your enlightening poetry! I relish its beauty and depth.. I cherish in my fave list.. Best regards.
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Date: 11/16/2019 4:20:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Your reading of my poetry and insightful comments are a true delight and very, very much appreciated. As I have put so very much into these famous poets dedication series ! A great and true blessing to see that noted, acknowledge and appreciated by such a fine poet and very kind person..
Date: 11/16/2019 12:18:00 PM
Two great poems friend...as always your rhymes and fLow are very good. You always take the reader on a journey which seems personal to you..
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Date: 11/16/2019 4:17:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Always a pleasure to receive a kind and very inspiring reply from you.
Date: 11/15/2019 5:11:00 PM
excellent penning my friend, glad i saw this one pop up tonight! hugs :)
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Date: 11/16/2019 4:16:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I am glad you lie it and gave a very kind and positive reply.

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