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In My Eyes - Two Form Style

Undressing you with my fiery gaze Coloring my lips red in your praise This cold spring breezy wind parting clouds Your patience against my impatience Laying your lips soft on my fragrance A silent dawn breaks into rhythmic melodies Landing compliments on paths taken Drizzles in the wind, leaves are shaken Sunlight filtering through dense estuary aqueous Jewel illumination Touching you with my soft silky voice Moistening my lips to enhance yours (Couplet + Innovative Haiku Style consecutively) The couplets are written in 9 syllables each, with the intention of denoting a cloud nine feeling. Starting with rhymed couplets and ending with unrhymed couplets. Innovative Haiku poems are haiku-like with one or more of the traditional haiku elements missing in its style. (Based on the definition from The Haiku Foundation)

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Date: 4/13/2016 3:05:00 PM
Beautifully structured pen angeline like the style you used wishing you a blessing of a day
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Angeline Haikutwinkle
Date: 4/18/2016 1:06:00 AM
Always..... beautiful comment

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