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In Dreams

In dreams i kiss destiny full on the lips I hold her close as I gazed in her star lit eyes She murmurs sofly before she lifts her hand Her touch visits my face finally, my heart races Then she fades into the whiteness reaching her palms out for me. To be continued... .

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/24/2013 8:59:00 PM

Ronny, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the wonderful win. :-) Epic, it is. <3 always & forever <3 ''LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/3/2012 7:28:00 PM

HI RONNY,,, CONGRATS IN BRIAN'S CONTEST... XOX~PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2012 2:43:00 PM

I LOVE this, Ronny. Wow!!! And congratulations. FAVE

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/1/2012 2:18:00 PM

A fine beginning! Congrad's on your win Light & Love

David Williams

Date: 6/1/2012 1:55:00 PM

Ronny congrats on yoru win..David

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/1/2012 5:39:00 AM

Congrats Ronny on a fantastic win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/31/2012 12:15:00 PM

cheers to you for the grreat win,ronny.. this is fabulous!. congrats and huggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/31/2012 11:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the #180 contest Ronny. Love, Carol

Terry O'Leary

Date: 5/31/2012 11:10:00 AM

Wonderful imagery... Congrats on your win... Terry

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 5/28/2012 6:37:00 PM

I see the fantastic viision too Ronnie; love those laswt 3 lines as they are so visual! A real beuty you wrote. Luv, Lizzie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/26/2012 10:27:00 AM

Good work on an interesting topic..I hope that destiny holds many good things for you..Thanks for stopping by my blog..Thanks for letting me know that you entered my contest..I appreciate you participating in it..I am feeling better today..Sara