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In Dreams, Her Spirit Sallied Forth: With Robert Lindley

Through frigid months, she waited for Spring rains to give relief and ease heartbroken pains, Nature will award that which Life commands placing her true love, in its gentle hands. O'sweet promise of passion's fine delights, candlelight dinners and intimate nights. With eager dreams her spirit sallied forth. Away from winter's chill, in the far North. Countless, were the eventides spent in dread Praying he'd stay safe 'fore lying abed She wished on stars in darkened Winter skies as tears pooled in her melancholy eyes Arctic winds blustered; through tall pines they'd blow, layers of oceans, in white waves of snow In Wintry dreams, her spirit sallied forth. Away from winter's chill, of the far North. Pictures sent from her beau, her Southern man whose dashing looks, deep blue eyes and bronzed tan, had her heart remembering their first kiss Without regret, love said, "Hold onto this!" To wake with dawn's sweet warmth, upon her face would ease her sorrow and heartache erase. In ardent dreams, her spirit sallied forth. Beyond the frosty chill of the far North. She brushed her hair, raven tresses fell Her firelight shadow evidenced the swell Softly, she hummed, cradling her unborn child A motherly instinct that brought forth a smile Having a babe, they had both long revered That he'd be back in time, she deeply feared. With anxious dreams, her spirit sallied forth. Further from winter's chill of the far North. She was haunted by his voice in a dream and awoke with the sound of her own scream Rain, her companion, on an April morn Pains let her know their child would soon be born Alone, she prayed that she'd know what to do In the door strode a man; eyes of deep blue. No longer a dream, her man had come forth To deliver their child in the far North. Thank you for opening the door to me for this write, Robert. It began on a cold Winter night, but Spring rains brought with it, a new beginning. Writing with you is like opening a treasure chest of beautiful gemstones.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/21/2019 7:40:00 AM
Exquisitely done! Your imagery brings tears to my soul. This does not often happen, my friend, like ever.
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Date: 12/5/2018 8:27:00 PM
Hello Lin Lain, I like happy endings. I have enjoyed this poem. have a nice evening my friend.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/18/2018 8:00:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene.
Date: 11/3/2018 7:35:00 AM
Fabulous collaboration you two, you make a great team...
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/3/2018 10:11:00 AM
Thank you ever so much, Charlie.
Date: 11/3/2018 1:22:00 AM
WOW! This magnificent work of art truly deserves POTD Lin and Robert! You are a dream team! This moved me to tears! A huge FAVE from me! Congratulations to both of you! ;.) xxoo
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Date: 11/3/2018 10:11:00 AM
You always leave such wonderful comments. Thank you, Connie.
Date: 11/2/2018 11:01:00 AM
Thanking you my dear friend again, for writing with me and creating this new creation that both showed great love and reality as it exists in this world. POTD honors, I am so truly proud to share with such a magnificently gifted writer and dear friend.. Merci
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/2/2018 2:16:00 PM
De rien, Robert'. We know this traveled along a path of its own choosing, and it led us to create something worthy of sharing.
Date: 11/2/2018 6:09:00 AM
Back to Congrats!!! on your POTD! Laney...a magnificent collab...poetry at its finest...you & Robert bring elegance and grace to this site...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 11/2/2018 9:56:00 AM
Many thanks, Winged One. Your comments are generous and kind.
Date: 11/2/2018 4:45:00 AM
Hi Lin, congratulations on the poem of the day honor with this excellent collaboration. Two talented poets create a living gem of poetry. A seamless piece where love flows through the gentle words that flow from one golden pen. Such creativity and grace flow to create this excellent work. Words from the heart are always special. Has to be a fave. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/2/2018 5:23:00 AM
G'morning and thank you, Mike. I'm pleased to find out from you that it's been made potd. Robert sent me his verses and I just filled in with my own, here and there. He is so deserving. Hoping you're well and happy.
Date: 11/1/2018 12:32:00 PM
Lady Lin and Sir Robert Lindley...a match made in heaven...poetically speaking...Superbly done my friends...love & light...^WW^
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2018 12:34:00 PM
I curtsy before you for such sweet sentiments, my warrior. And I think I see Robert poised to bow. We embrace your commendations, dear sir.
Date: 11/1/2018 12:16:00 PM
Absolutely gorgeous Lin and Robert, the poem flows so seemlessly I have no idea who wrote which lines - love the impact of the repeated couplet which changes so perfectly:-) adding this gem to my faves - one of the best collabs I've read in a long time:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/1/2018 12:32:00 PM
Thanks for the great response, Chick. I think we'll not tell who wrote which verses. It's a wonderful compliment that no one seems able to tell. Huggin' ya back.
Date: 11/1/2018 12:05:00 PM
I don't know what I find more beautiful, the poem or your message to Robert at the end. Both were heart touching and so absolutely beautiful You two work very well together as a poetic team. Seamless is this poem as I know it is from two poets but only hear one voice. Bravo to both of you.
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2018 12:30:00 PM
Your words honor both of us, Chris. Robert is one of the most congenial poets with whom I've had the pleasure of sharing a pen. Thank you for your ever supportive comments, and your mention of my tribute to Robert at the end brought a smile to my lips. Merci.
Date: 11/1/2018 10:35:00 AM
A very, very well written poem. Thank you for sharing!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2018 10:45:00 AM
Thank you, Christopher, for reading and taking a moment to leave a comment.
Date: 11/1/2018 10:21:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend. So very kind of you to invite me to write again with you and also give such sage advice and help editing my verses. I sincerely appreciate your friendship, great advice and magnificent verses that make this piece so beautiful..
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2018 10:43:00 AM
You're welcome, and my thanks back to you for being such an open-minded gentleman. It's always a gratifying experience to write with you.
Date: 11/1/2018 10:17:00 AM
You mentioned gems Lin, this is one gem of a poem A brilliant collaboration between two of soup's finest Congrats to you and Robert. Tom.
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2018 10:41:00 AM
Your reflections are welcome words, Sir Thomas of Cunningham. Smiles and thanks from both of us.
Date: 11/1/2018 10:12:00 AM
Fantastic seamless collaboration, the talent between you two astounds. Gorgeous piece you two. xomo x2 <3 <3
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2018 10:40:00 AM
Thanks so much for your kind remarks, Mo. We are grateful for your thoughts.

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