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In Autumn Dreams

In autumn dreams, I see your face aglow You’re by my side; we’re lying in the leaves Your warmth transcends the chilly winds that blow And then I wake to know that my heart grieves You’re by my side; we’re lying in the leaves A golden sun is listening to our love And then I wake to know that my heart grieves I’m all alone, a hand without a glove A golden sun is listening to our love Yet just in dreams, can you still be with me? I’m all alone, a hand without a glove And just in thoughts can your face, I still see Yet just in dreams can you still be with me I wake to find I’m in an empty bed And just in thoughts can your face, I still see I hear your whispered secrets in my head You’re by my side; we’re lying in the leaves Your warmth transcends the chilly winds that blow A golden sun is listening to our love In autumn dreams, I see your face aglow 10/5/17

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Date: 10/11/2017 3:21:00 PM
This poem is beautifully written.I felt I was apart of this poem.Because that is how i read your poetry. have a ni e cday my friend. xxxooo.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/11/2017 4:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene, I really appreciate you kind words xxxooo
Date: 10/9/2017 8:25:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful--so moving, Mike! Janice
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/9/2017 9:33:00 AM
Thanks so much, Janice ! XXOO
Date: 10/7/2017 5:36:00 AM
Loverly imagery and a powerful Pantoum, Mike. Well done. Regards, John.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/7/2017 6:26:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate your kind words.
Date: 10/5/2017 4:04:00 PM
This is very powerful Mike . So well written and expressed :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/7/2017 6:27:00 AM
Thank you as always, Heidi xxoo
Date: 10/5/2017 11:27:00 AM
This is really romantic Mike, have your fallen in love? Or is this about your current beloved? Some great lines and use of metaphors in this..
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/5/2017 11:30:00 AM
Thank you, Silent One. Been blessed with love for a long time. This is how it feels to be alone, even for a short bit of time!

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