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In a Hidden Garden

In a hidden garden where roses red perfume the air, we can meet beneath moon’s glow. There with you I long to go. We shall sit near Hawthorn trees. Fragrant blossoms we shall smell as they waft in May's soft breeze. Love and loveliness there dwell! May 29, 2018 for Joseph May's Eight Lines Poetry Contest

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/11/2018 9:41:00 AM

Well done Andrea, congratulations. Tom.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/11/2018 9:28:00 AM

Swinging back with - congratulations on another lovely win, my friend! Hugs! Pandita

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/5/2018 11:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Andrea. Your poem is an aromatic delight! :) gw

Eve Roper

Date: 6/5/2018 10:58:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 6/5/2018 2:32:00 AM

A lovely poem, Andrea. Congratulations.

John Gondolf

Date: 6/4/2018 10:35:00 AM

Andrea, back to say congrats for your win on this beautiful poem. John

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/4/2018 12:38:00 AM

Back to congratulate you on your win with this beautiful nature poem! Sounds like a lovely place to go.

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/3/2018 9:20:00 PM

Congrats on your top win, Andrea.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/3/2018 8:51:00 PM

Nice and so fragrant, I could detect the sweet blooming flowers !! Congrats to you, Andrea!

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/3/2018 8:23:00 PM

Back to say congratulations Andrea:)

Joseph May

Date: 6/3/2018 7:38:00 PM

This beautiful write flows nicely Andrea..Congrats on your win

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/3/2018 6:31:00 PM

Andie, this piece is wonderfully romantic and sweet, so appealng to the senses! Congrats, my friend on a great win! Hugs. Pandita

Marc Acrich

Date: 6/2/2018 8:27:00 PM

Remind me of this song https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ym3_m_Apfas

Marc Acrich

Date: 6/2/2018 8:26:00 PM

You know how to write poetry don't you. Yes, you do

Pashang Salehi

Date: 5/31/2018 8:15:00 PM

So romantic... beautiful...

Jim Joyce

Date: 5/31/2018 8:04:00 AM

such a lovely and brilliant piece.. saying so much in few words

Eve Roper

Date: 5/30/2018 11:11:00 PM

Very beautiful verse. Luck in the contest Hugs Eve

James Peranteau

Date: 5/30/2018 10:30:00 PM

This write is the reason why I come to PS, I once in a while find a fantastical insight into another artist's muse...Ty dear poet...forgive mine pithy appreciation..*winks..Much love, james

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/30/2018 3:52:00 PM

When i read poetry this good, i wonder if the invite is for the reader, if so, you would be totally swamped with suitors, with me at the front of the queue.