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A swirling depth, those baby blues
          Soft azure mists with golden hues
               Now conjure sexy don'ts and do's
     As midst your ire they run me thru ...

          Impaled ...

A dazzling shine, those fingertips
          Of scalding red to match your lips
               With pointy fashion each one rips
     My back, its flesh in tender strips ...

          Impaled ...

The saucy swing your hips display
          Each eye held captive to the sway
               A coy come-hither game you play
     And I, run through like callow clay ...

          Impaled ...

I crave your scolds, I must admit
          So hold me o'er love's burning pit
               Confirming passion's flames are lit
     Then turn me slow upon your spit ...

          Impaled.





~ 2nd Place ~  in the "Impaled" Poetry Contest, Anthony Slausin, Judge & Sponsor.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/8/2019 2:01:00 AM
Glad this wonderful slice of spice got the credit it deserved! Going to add it to my faves too actually as it didn’t disappoint on second read! Well done Greg!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 8/31/2019 11:39:00 PM
Many of the kindest thank yous for this wonderful comment, Nina, and for adding to your favs - blessings, Dear Poet! :o) <3
Date: 8/7/2019 12:53:00 PM
'Turn me slowly upon your spit' -- that impaling has me all pale and a-tremble...You certainly are no shrinking violet when it comes to penning these red-hot passion poems, my friend. Congrats on your trophy win in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 8/31/2019 11:38:00 PM
Very, very kind of you, Gershon, and I thank you sincerely for this wonderful comment ... good to see you "around", M8, and I'm please you enjoyed this one. Blessings! :o)
Date: 8/7/2019 9:31:00 AM
WOW! Greg, CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 8/31/2019 11:37:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Janice! :o) <3
Date: 7/31/2019 5:06:00 PM
Ooh-hoo! No spit roast jokes HERE. Ohhh no. Love this, it made me naughty-giggle. Yep. Still gigglin’.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 8/31/2019 11:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nina, this comment made me giggle - I'm pleased you enjoyed this one! :o) <3
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 7/31/2019 5:07:00 PM
(and still giggling...)
Date: 7/30/2019 8:57:00 PM
Oh my goodness! I predict another win! Such a great write, Greg!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 7/30/2019 11:31:00 PM
Oh, that's very sweet of you, Kim, and I thank you so much! I also hope you're right, but your comment is already a prize! Blessings, Dear Poet! :o) <3
Date: 7/30/2019 10:58:00 AM
Turn me slow upon your spit...yikes that's really impaled, this is a winner for me, one of your best a fave!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 7/30/2019 6:36:00 PM
Thank you so very much, John ... you have an amazing eye for what makes a poem unusual and fresh and of quality, and I am so appreciative of that. This is one of those (very) few that just flowed, for whatever reason, but those are always my favorites, and my best, in my opinion. I'm really happy that you liked and commented on this one ... blessings, Brother! :o)