Impaled

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A swirling depth, those baby blues Soft azure mists with golden hues Now conjure sexy don'ts and do's As midst your ire they run me thru ... Impaled ... A dazzling shine, those fingertips Of scalding red to match your lips With pointy fashion each one rips My back, its flesh in tender strips ... Impaled ... The saucy swing your hips display Each eye held captive to the sway A coy come-hither game you play And I, run through like callow clay ... Impaled ... I crave your scolds, I must admit So hold me o'er love's burning pit Confirming passion's flames are lit Then turn me slow upon your spit ... Impaled. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Impaled" Poetry Contest, Anthony Slausin, Judge & Sponsor.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/7/2019 12:53:00 PM

'Turn me slowly upon your spit' -- that impaling has me all pale and a-tremble...You certainly are no shrinking violet when it comes to penning these red-hot passion poems, my friend. Congrats on your trophy win in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/31/2019 11:38:00 PM

Very, very kind of you, Gershon, and I thank you sincerely for this wonderful comment ... good to see you "around", M8, and I'm please you enjoyed this one. Blessings! :o)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/7/2019 9:31:00 AM

WOW! Greg, CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/31/2019 11:37:00 PM

Many kind thanks to you, Janice! :o) <3

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/30/2019 8:57:00 PM

Oh my goodness! I predict another win! Such a great write, Greg!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/30/2019 11:31:00 PM

Oh, that's very sweet of you, Kim, and I thank you so much! I also hope you're right, but your comment is already a prize! Blessings, Dear Poet! :o) <3

John Hamilton

Date: 7/30/2019 10:58:00 AM

Turn me slow upon your spit...yikes that's really impaled, this is a winner for me, one of your best a fave!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/30/2019 6:36:00 PM

Thank you so very much, John ... you have an amazing eye for what makes a poem unusual and fresh and of quality, and I am so appreciative of that. This is one of those (very) few that just flowed, for whatever reason, but those are always my favorites, and my best, in my opinion. I'm really happy that you liked and commented on this one ... blessings, Brother! :o)