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Impacts of Oneness

Here, our love was first cast in impacts of oneness ~ ~ now mocking meadow grass clasps me, chained to numbness. Vast tears rip me with shaking-grips of steady spill ~ ~ heartbreak and tears weaken me, beat from their drummed trill. ... CayCay March 24, 2019

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/31/2019 6:12:00 AM

CayCay I have printed this out and intend to read it from time to time, because everyone can use a little more beauty in their life.

Constance La France

Date: 3/29/2019 11:00:00 AM

CayCay, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned piece ~

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/28/2019 12:18:00 AM

CayCy dear friend, congratulations on your win in the contest - a great poem, a great poem as always. Wrote to Andrea - soup mail will follow shortly, when I come up for breath. Poetry Hugs, Jenny.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/27/2019 2:31:00 PM

- A great poem for this writing challenge ... congratulations, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2019 1:11:00 AM

deep and emotive one, Caycay. I feel the melancholy. i'm here not even 1/2 caught up and just gotta get to bed. Thanks for lending your ear when i was at my dad's.. you are such a sweetie!