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If This Beauty Shall Be My Final Curtain, Let It Be Dropped Slowly

Parched and dry, this barren field stretches, I wander, head hung low, staring at the emptiness eclipsing my thoughts Brittle blades of grass disappear beneath my worn out sneakers, black and white crushing beige in slow fashioned footprints of blistered dust “My sanity for some cool water” When upon my shoulders, reddened by solar intensity, wet from exerted energy, comes a breeze as if Autumn has come to claim her colors, to gather her brown and sepia landscape, pull the lifeless trees, with little leaf from the chalk textured ground taking it where it would suit another, for this is my luck "Take my shade I beg not, for it is merely a branch” Like fingers of a silken web’s reach, a soft caress of skin is not understood, though very pleasant Nature finds me a shiver, a small comfort in this arid place once crawling with snakes of assorted length, now green as if lush has just been defined with sweet air and pomegranate skies featuring a glow, pristine shades of which I’ve never seen, heavenly “To whom might I thank for such a gift?” When before me stands, my eyes saturated and lost slowly focus on beauty, winged loveliness now smiling within my own personal oasis, which quickly forms in my heart An angel, a goddess, extends a hand to me? My cracked and weathered palm touches, smooth, gentle her hand as she lifts me, I am weightless, floating to her, my breath leaves me as I wonder, is this my end? “If this beauty shall be my final curtain, let it be dropped slowly” A voice of velvet speaks, as I fade in and out of reality, now steadied by her touch and the sweet scent of lavender and lime “I have come to you as a verse, for poetry is thy keeper, thy words have been heard,” lyrical this voice sings melodic and harmonious, a rhythm to the beat of my heart, the race of my pulse, the love of my life, my muse, my all “Eternal to you I shall write, for your beauty fuels my pen”
*I feel this poem speaks of poetry, the reason we are all here. To find and share our muse, to be inspired and grow together in poetry. It also was a step out of my comfort zone for me as this was an early write of mine where I tried a few new ideas.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/9/2016 11:22:00 AM
Stunning yet again Chris, your muse is on a roll! Charmaine said it all, you precisely chisel emotions out of written words, you are a composer and creator of the utmost caliber!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/9/2016 12:58:00 PM
Wow, even your comments are poetic. Thanks Paloma, you always make me smile when you visit.
Date: 11/9/2016 12:18:00 AM
Cont...We all need that angel in our life..that help us find happiness..It seems here the one is touched by poetry....and the last marked line-Eternally to you I shall write for your beauty fuels my pen....Indeed the muses will be happy to see any poet write for them..and the more one writes...the more the spirit e xhales..and so does happiness through the way...An exceptional poem.You are a wordsmith..and a talent indeed..A fave.
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Date: 11/9/2016 8:24:00 AM
What a wonderful review of my poem I have found here this morning. You have captured the essence of what I was trying to express beautifully. I really do love when someone dives into my work and finds the meanings I have laced through. This review has brought a he smile to my face. I am so very happy you liked this one Charmaine. I wish I could say more, thank you jut doesn't seem enough.
Date: 11/9/2016 12:13:00 AM
My sanity for some cool water-I feel thristiness,dryness, someone searching...Deep.Take my shade I beg not for it is only a branch...This makes me think of a person who doesnt feel strong enough to protect another..We all been there ..at that fragile moment..Guess its what makes us human.To whom might I thank for such a gift-this part it seems the one is now seeing the pasture land..and branch have leaves.If this beauty shall be my final curtain,let it be dropped slowly-
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Date: 11/8/2016 5:52:00 PM
This is "real poetry" to me.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/9/2016 8:05:00 AM
Thank you so much Sunlite, what a nice thing to say. I am happy you enjoyed this.
Date: 11/8/2016 5:19:00 PM
Wow! This is amazing. Such depth and thought into this. Very well written, worth reading more than once. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/8/2016 5:38:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness and encouraging thoughts Heidi. This comment has made my day. :)
Date: 11/8/2016 5:17:00 PM
Wow, Chris, you have done it again my friend. What a rip snorter! This is going in my favourites too!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/8/2016 5:37:00 PM
Thanks again my friend. That I know for a fact is my very first "rip snorter" comment ever. :) I'm glad you liked it Rick.

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