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If I Were Your Love

If I were your love, I would adore you, making every day your happiest day. And I would make all of your dreams come true, coaxing your inner child to come and play. You'd experience a life full of joy for I would never treat you like a toy, and the whole world would be yours to enjoy. You'd never fear the dark; I'd be your light, you'd never lose your way; I'd be your sight, and in your fantasies, your shining knight. You'd feel a love felt only by a few for I'd listen to every word you say feeling that I was blessed to be your boy and we’d laugh and cuddle tight every night. (Fragmented Rhyme) 04/19/2023 If I Were Your Love Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose Rhymezone/HowManySyllables Fragmented Rhyme Constance La France invented it; it has 14 lines with lots of indentation and a rhyme pattern to follow. Do not divide it into stanzas. Rhyme scheme, ABABCCCDDDABCD Line 1- Indent 24 spaces - A Line 2- Indent 12 spaces- B Line 3- A Line 4- B Line 5- Indent 24 spaces- C Line 6- C Line 7- C Line 8- Indent 6 spaces- D Line 9- Indent 12 spaces- D Line 10-Indent 24 spaces- D Line 11- A Line 12-Indent 12 spaces- B Line 13-Indent 6 spaces- C Line 14-Indent 12 D

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Date: 5/4/2023 9:34:00 PM
Nice work Emile. Beautifully penned, Congrats for your win.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/5/2023 7:59:00 AM
Thanks, Jay, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2023 7:04:00 AM
Lucky lady Emile. A sweet, romantic write in a beautiful form. Congratulations on your win my friend! :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/3/2023 8:00:00 AM
Thanks, Linda, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/2/2023 11:29:00 PM
Very lovely Emile, congratulations:)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/3/2023 8:00:00 AM
Thanks, Joanna, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/21/2023 5:37:00 AM
Emile, your poem is so lovely, I would be so happy to have such a man to love me, a FAV for me. And thank you so much for using my created form Fragmented Rhyme, you made it look beautiful. Best of luck in the contest. PS, I sent your a soupmail today !
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/21/2023 9:43:00 AM
Thanks, Constance, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/19/2023 10:19:00 AM
Hello Emile, oh such a beautiful romantic poem. Isense a deep feeling the person has for this person. My friend, enjoy your day./Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/20/2023 3:00:00 PM
Hello Emile, I hope all is well with you. You are welcome. /Darlene\
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/19/2023 12:48:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene, as always, your comments are welcomed and appreciated, my friend, Emile.

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