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If I Was Thor Son of Odin

Hammer strikes, thunders emerge ripping dark skies to burn Satan's toys___nukes Aug 29, 2020 17 syllables ~Monoku If I Am A Super Heroine-Hero Poetry Contest Placement: 01

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Emilia James

Date: 9/14/2020 3:37:00 PM

Enjoyed your Monoku thank you. Would be great to see Satan's toys gone. Congratulations on your win. Emilia : )

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/14/2020 10:12:00 PM

Thanks :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/12/2020 5:27:00 PM

Striking imagery, Paghunda. I love the title and your monoku - very powerful! They that could rid the world of Satan's toys would be a mighty hero indeed! Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/12/2020 10:24:00 PM

Thank you Susan. We really need to get rid of those toys.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2020 3:25:00 PM

would love to see the end of Satan's nukes!! Congrats in the contest.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/1/2020 7:33:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. I would love that too.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2020 8:13:00 AM

- Congratulations you are a Super Heroine, Paghunda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/1/2020 7:32:00 PM

Thanks Anne

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/31/2020 6:38:00 AM

Greek mythology is fascinating Paghu nda, but then again, every country has its folklore and ancient history - I am a true historian, should have been an archaeologist! Thor is a mighty God, great write - good luck. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 8/31/2020 12:16:00 PM

You can still write poems about them. Thor is my favorite too.

John Watt

Date: 8/29/2020 1:07:00 PM

A nice hero to choose for your monoku, Paghunda! I enjoyed the read.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 8/29/2020 1:43:00 PM

Thanks :)