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If For a Moment

If for a moment you felt The dreams that I feel Capturing the beauty of love You would make them real If for a moment you touched The stars that I see Embracing their shine You would feel me If for a moment you heard The winds that sway Caressing the night You would always stay If for a moment you felt The dreams that never part Wrapping around this love You would be . . . . . . Close to my heart Featured Poem- 11/6/2022

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Joseph May

Date: 5/11/2021 7:13:00 PM

The refrain defines your poem beautifully Brandy, best wishes

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/11/2021 7:30:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph. So kind of you to say. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. :) Brandy

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/3/2019 3:53:00 PM

Sweet...the budding of you...I like it...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/4/2019 12:03:00 PM

Such a sweet thing to say. :) Thank you Arturo. Your thoughts bring a smile. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 9/26/2018 4:52:00 PM

Your words capture the beauty of love and caress my day dear poetess... :) John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/26/2018 6:58:00 PM

:) Awe, such a sweet thing to say. Thank you John. ~ Brandy

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 7/10/2018 7:34:00 PM

Your words are so beautiful.You write with such sweetness and passion yet with an ethereal quality.As always your poetry is a delight to read.Thank you Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/10/2018 8:43:00 PM

Thank you SYLVIA. I always write from the depth of my heart. I appreciate your lovely comment. Thank you for being You. :) Brandy

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/26/2018 6:27:00 AM

WoW! Maia, I see why Lyric got inspired to write an echo of this lovely piece. It is such a profound and beautiful declaration of love. I found it to to be very romantic as well:-) Alexis

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/26/2018 12:14:00 PM

Hi Alexis. Thank you for your kind words. I am happy that you enjoyed this poem of love and longing. Of dreams. :) Maia

Lyric Man

Date: 6/25/2018 8:45:00 PM

I wrote an echo poem to your incredible write.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/25/2018 9:25:00 PM

An echo? Oh my, I had no idea. I have just commented on your poem, not knowing my poem was the inspiration. I am breathless. Thank you Lyric Man. ~ Maia

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/18/2018 7:57:00 AM

It s yet another beautiful poem of yours, especially the last two lines, I love reading them,good luck and continue to write such heartfelt poems,

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/18/2018 11:53:00 AM

Your thoughts bring a smile. Thank you Faraz. :) Maia

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/15/2018 9:52:00 AM

OMG! This is an amazing romantic piece filled with such love! What a write! Love it! Pandita

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/15/2018 3:34:00 PM

Pandita, thank you for your nice comment. :) I am happy that you enjoyed my poem. ~ Maia