Get Your Premium Membership

If Any One God

If any One God defined Himself to what would He compare? Would wrong be that of air perhaps melody so rare Mozart’s raging hair surely He could use all these with harmony of trees with illumination both apparent and hidden-- those seen and unseen, in the white light blue and green… which way should God then lean toward or away from man?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/16/2020 1:30:00 PM
I believe it is our natural inclination to question God. Much as a teenager questions their parent. Like most teenagers we lack the wisdom to form an accurate assessment.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/11/2019 10:19:00 PM
Quite a dilemma for a God, if the only one, since what would there be against which to evaluate him/her self - except his own creation (modelled on him/her self?) Beautifully and succinctly expressed, Joe.
Login to Reply
Dimino Avatar
Joe Dimino
Date: 1/14/2019 6:44:00 AM
:) And who has a better right to ask...than his/her self creation? Thank you so much for commenting, Geoffrey; really enjoyed your thoughtful reply. Have a great day my friend!
Date: 11/6/2018 7:02:00 PM
Vivid and profound, very moving!
Login to Reply
Dimino Avatar
Joe Dimino
Date: 11/8/2018 11:32:00 PM
Thank you so much. Have a great day!
Date: 11/5/2018 11:15:00 PM
There is a purity in your verse. -Richard
Login to Reply
Dimino Avatar
Joe Dimino
Date: 11/8/2018 11:33:00 PM
You made my day. Thank you!

Book: Shattered Sighs