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If I could

I would

If I couldn't

I would hope

You would

If there were a ship that sailed to happiness, I would be your captain and give you all a one way ticket If there were a plane that flew to peace, I would be your pilot and I would fly you all to happiness If there were a road that led to eternal love and endless hate, I would be your chariot and your hands would be tied to my horses reigns for evermore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/4/2018 11:16:00 PM
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I liked all of this, Charlie, and on my 4th read, I FINALLY got the last two lines. (I sure can be dense sometimes). Very, very nice. Touching! Best wishes, Gershon
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Charles Messina
Date: 7/4/2018 11:28:00 PM
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Sometimes it is hard to decipher what one writes or what one is thinking. I am as dense as you my friend when reading some of the poetry here...Thank you for the kind words and I'm happy you understood my wild imaginations...All the best, Charlie
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/3/2018 2:01:00 AM
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Great. True togetherness with Self and with a soulmate. Congratulations, Kai
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Charles Messina
Date: 7/3/2018 8:44:00 AM
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Thank you my friend! Charlie
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/3/2018 2:01:00 AM
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Great. True togetherness with Self and with a soulmate. Congratulations, Kai
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/29/2018 8:18:00 PM
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Charles.. I like this!!
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Charles Messina
Date: 6/30/2018 7:10:00 AM
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Thank you, LM! Have a nice weekend!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 6/29/2018 5:51:00 PM
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someone has to do it, if not you then who then maybe them or me ? Nice one
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Charles Messina
Date: 6/30/2018 7:11:00 AM
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Absolutely! Thank you Pixie, have a nice weekend!
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/29/2018 4:50:00 PM
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I would let you be my guide Charles - what lovely sentiments:-) hugs jan xx
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Charles Messina
Date: 6/30/2018 7:12:00 AM
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And I would be honored to do so...such kind words Jan! Have a great weekend...hugs // Charlie xx

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