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If, I could control the atmospheric pressure of the world, then, I could have the perfect days for every mood of mine; sometimes I would want the beauty of a wild storm whirling, or on the beach, I could summon up great ocean waves. I would bring golden sunshine to my garden for the flowers, a rainbow of colors, all perfect and all on my own demand; and on hot days I would summon a cool summer rain shower, then, the sun would break through the sky shining. The ocean would be a perfect emerald-blue for swimming, the forest lush green and jungle hot or cool if I want; I could make it snow those perfect snowflakes in winter, if I could control the atmospheric pressure of the world. _______________________ August 25, 2017 Poetry/Verse/If, I Could Copyright Protected, ID 17-9336-18-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 9/24/2017 2:34:00 PM
Wow! I do like this poem very much. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 8/25/2017 6:23:00 PM
Fascinating write, Broken Wings.. I love the dream you walked me through. Good luck in the contest a winner already ~*
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Date: 8/25/2017 4:59:00 PM
Wow! Cool picture you chose for this poem. This is so artistically written BW. I love the reprise in the last line and how you flowed into it so smoothly. I wish the best in the contest.
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