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I wrote you

Wake up throw up hair of the dog, Light up snort up clear out the fog, Wrote another letter sent it to you, Go pick out a ball and a bottle or two, Mind is racing scared of losing you, But now that I don't love you you seem further away, Wake up drink up hair of the dog, Light up smoke up Sybil at the switch, Lost another lapse of time no more memories, Crank and racing thoughts it's time to ditch this hitch I've been pulling, Wrote a letter to you; goodbye, Hundreds of miles away but now that I miss you you seem further away, I woke up I messed up do you remember me, I came back again looking for you the lost part of me, My mind gone my heart broken how can this be, Was I even worth the memories, Where's the darn time machine, Wake up throw up hair of the dog, Light up snort up clear out the fog, Wrote a letter decided not to send it mind is lost and so are you, Woke up wrote a letter missing you, Wish everything would have been better for you too!

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Date: 2/9/2019 1:33:00 PM
Love the pace of this poem. It so clearly paints a picture.
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Date: 2/5/2019 6:03:00 PM
Love it! the message and tempo is terrific! Great Poem.
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Date: 2/3/2019 9:21:00 AM
I hope that you find peace in your aloneness and become one with solitude. Many of us can relate to the sadness and pain in this poem. Thank you for opening up your heart to us, Ashlyn. May comfort and love find you well. Berteena
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Date: 1/28/2019 9:58:00 PM
This is really good! You can see the brokenness in them, and your poem really brings it out! Shows you have a sensitive and caring soul. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/28/2019 6:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM well done
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Date: 1/28/2019 4:43:00 PM
A poignant write, Ashlyn. Congrats.
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