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I Wonder, How Are You?

As I open my eyes at early dawn Soft sun light streaming through the naked limbs of the old oak Filter through laced-curtains hung even though its winter To let in the light by day or the light of a moonlit night I greet our Maker at first then my thoughts run straight to you And I wonder how are you? Are you well? Are you awake? Did they give you a warm blanket last night, One of the coldest days of winter? What did they feed you for supper? Did you stay up ‘till 2:00 as you usually do? As I go through my day I feel your love trailing me As I move from one place to another Embracing, teasing me, imploring, “Come sit awhile with me” Did you feel my warmth in the letter I wrote? D'ya notice, I tried to outdo you! You wrote twelve compared to fifteen!? I need to tell you everyday how much I love you, just as you are That I thank you for being there for me with encouraging Words, holding me, loving me, lifting me, accepting me Just as I am, needing me as I need you, believing undoubtedly Our long search is over, we have finally arrived To: My Love, JAM, a gem that is entangled, buried deep in a world not of his making From: His peanut butter, Sunshine*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/5/2010 9:07:00 AM
Such a tender moment here, and you give me the privilege to share it. Be bless. You are always such an inspiration when you read my work, I pray your light may make the angels sing of you in glory. Keep up the good work and thanks, my friend
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Date: 1/5/2010 8:20:00 AM
this poem shows much depth to your character, definately worth the read
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Date: 1/4/2010 10:05:00 PM
audrey, thanks so much for your comment to me earlier. This poem makes me wonder who the person is. At first when you mentioned "did they give you warm blankets" I thought it could be a son at camp, but then the other lines made me think it was a husband or boyfriend. But what man writes 12 pages. Mine could barely write one. haha. Let me know, ok? It is a very sweet poem. Luv, andrea
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Date: 1/4/2010 4:49:00 PM
enjoyed reading today.
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Date: 1/3/2010 2:29:00 PM
Beautiful poem full of love and care..Charma
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Date: 1/2/2010 8:49:00 PM
No its not my entry for Raul's contest .. that entry is The Love Senses.. its about the same Honda man in my Bold and Spicy poem.. he is a handful... bad at making decisions when it comes to little ole me... but I am learning patience of which I have NONE at the moment.. luv your comments Audrey.. they are always so uplifting and adorable... hope Raul likes the one did enter.. hard to choose when lots of them are about Mr. Bold and Spicy.. luv.. HNY Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/2/2010 7:15:00 PM
Audrey, This is beautiful and I'm so happy for you...I love your poem too...I tagged you for the PIM...I hope you don't mind. Marty
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Date: 1/2/2010 5:10:00 PM
A very touching and moving poem Andrey. Such loving sentiment poured out unto one who, is loved by yourself. An awesome poem. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 1/2/2010 11:23:00 AM
Very touchin! Sounds like a soul mate to me, dear Audrey. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/2/2010 10:38:00 AM
Lovely and touching poetry Audrey and so emotional too.. to feel so deeply for another human being is awesome and a gift too.. enjoyed your narrative... everyone seems to be writing this way today .. interesting... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/2/2010 10:07:00 AM
This is really touching, Audrey! I think anybody reading this could also somehow relate, especially if they also have someone in a similar situation--but I guess love can transcend through different barriers, I honestly believe that--thanks for sharing :) was moved by this...
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Date: 1/2/2010 9:55:00 AM
This is a good poem i believe everyone would like to know those very questions about someone in there lifes!!!
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