I Wish

Can you hear my teardrops fall, so quietly down my cheeks, you probably never noticed them, as you walked away to leave. Many months of letting go, weigh heavy on my mind, the days and nights of loneliness, are now to many times. When you go out tonight, and morning is anew, I wish you love and happiness, and I wish it for me too.

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Date: 10/25/2008 5:51:00 PM

If we wished people good things more often rather than tearing them down, what a wonderful world this would be. Wonderful message in your poem. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/25/2008 11:13:00 AM

Hoping this is change for the better. Sad and difficult, but I sense great things after the tears. You are just too good. Hold on. Love you, Shar xoxo

Ronald Bingham

Date: 10/24/2008 10:52:00 PM

I wish for you all of God's favor and that you are blessed ten fold as much as you have been a blessing to others, Always, Ron P.S. things can only look brighter!

Mc Mc

Date: 10/24/2008 10:45:00 PM

genuine and adored!

Michael Torres

Date: 10/24/2008 6:07:00 PM

Christy this is sad. It is also showing tremendous love for the other person. Beautiful write. Blessings Michael

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/24/2008 5:50:00 PM

I wish it for you too, Christy. Much happiness :) ~ Carrie