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I Surrender

the outline of your silhouette is e t c h e d in all things that bring splendor, for you are my a z u r e sky and a medallion LOVE I shall render- I NEVER knew thirst until you quenched me . . . . I utterly SURRENDER. When Three Lines Are So Much Better 51 syllables total howmanysyllables.com Sponsor: Silent One June 6, 2018

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Date: 6/8/2018 11:08:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Luloo, and congratulations on your win!! Blessings to you and your family! :) Bartholomew
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Date: 6/8/2018 6:46:00 AM
Simply wonderful, Laura! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 6/8/2018 1:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Laura with a great rhyme.
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Date: 6/7/2018 8:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win :) great write and imagery, laura. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/7/2018 8:38:00 PM
CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN MY FRIEND. I love the depth, truth and creativity in this one..
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Date: 6/7/2018 7:14:00 PM
Beautiful emotion! Congrats on the win, Laura Loo
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Date: 6/7/2018 3:49:00 PM
Many congrats on you win Laura...All the best...Charlie
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Date: 6/7/2018 1:16:00 PM
Congrats :)
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Date: 6/7/2018 1:05:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/7/2018 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Laura :)
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Date: 6/7/2018 12:23:00 PM
I see he swept you off ya feet.. congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 6/6/2018 12:17:00 PM
Lovely, best wishes in the contest LuLoo...
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