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I Sent You a Voicemail Confessing My Love, But the Service Was Terrible

Hello I hope all is Can hear me? ‘ts me (youknowwho) need say Something Don’t hurt Sorry if weird (iknowwe’rejustfriends) But I love y For a while now You stunned Me took my breath away (ifwerebeingcliche) like No other You’ve caught my attention since before Your face striking also soft And your mind exploding with joy and perfect words and perfect when you speak your voice a song and when you laugh ‘M sorry wait a You hear me? No reception here butijusthadtosaysomething somaybeifitalkquicklyit’llallsqueezeinandiwon’tgetcuto Maybe should say again love you and also the things about you thewayyouholdmygaze likeiamabrokenpieceofasinkingshipandyouareitsdrowningpassenger butyouholditcautiouslysoidontbreakunderneathyourgrip likeyouknowiamfragileglasswaitingtobreak likeyouknowme like ‘lo? can hear ? service is bad might hang up but have to say like and warm arms soft freckles a (youmakemefeelbeautiful) like golden sun (icouldspendalldaywithyou) cross legged on your carpet like it know us also couch just when kind car the silver stars aligned when you took my hands and put your thumb against my palm and smiled i churning ocean clinging your life raft (youknowialwaysgetoverdramatic) there? hear me? i maybe need hang up but pleaseunderstand you are every thing to me (click)

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Date: 6/28/2020 7:25:00 PM
Fantastic art. xomo
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Date: 9/5/2019 5:57:00 PM
What a great idea! The way you laid out the poem, I could "hear" the phone breaking up. Great job!
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Date: 9/5/2019 4:34:00 AM
Incredibly creative, Zoe, I've never seen anything quite like it! Touching piece.
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Date: 8/16/2019 5:37:00 PM
Wow. Breathless read. I loved every ....incrediblespacedperfecthangingintheair...word..againandagain... Welcome to the soup. Ann
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Zoe Baber
Date: 8/20/2019 3:37:00 PM
Thanks! xx
Date: 8/14/2019 12:38:00 PM
Zoe, this poem was exceedingly creative, and the typing of it BRILLIANT. Loved it. Welcome to Soup!
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Zoe Baber
Date: 8/14/2019 10:24:00 PM
Thank you so much :)

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