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I am likely to rewrite this work quite a few times yet. There is something here I’m sure however I have yet to find it. I hope your feed back my friends will help me. I love poetrysoup and I love the amazing poets here. I have been suffering with acute depression of late. I have my dark moments. It is difficult for me to visit my friend’s works these days. I do make an effort I assure you. I love all of you more than you’ll ever know. I love your words and your imaginations I love your giving nature. I know sometimes not all of us agree but I don’t know where I would be without you my dear friends. That you can take to the bank. Remember there are many great artists few are ever recognized. Keep happy and keep writing.

I have started work, directing and co writing a web series and also a film. There are pieces written here by poets that I will want to use of course I will approach you at the time. One last time I remind you that I love your poetry...I love you all.

always,

armand

guilty as charged i stole it tall every consonant every vowel every word every sentence plagiarized the ocean in its unique shades of blues and greens combined and blended to create its very own colour a tint i call ocean brave covered in water topped off in water surrounded by water immersed in water stunning the ocean plagiarized the beach in unique shades of beiges and whites combined and blended to create a brand new fabric they call it whiskey white a trillion grains parts unknown the total sum of all unified to act as one the beach plagiarized the cloud in unique shades of this and that combined and blended to create mystery spin the wheel if you wish a blank pallet- blush a perfectly complex complexion- luminous coloured in soft and titillating to the touch- pigment oh the touch- intense light as air immaculate the cloud plagiarized the living in unique shades of everything combined and blended to create a cornucopia of finishes, stains combined and blended the world of the living with all its bells and whistles the unmitigated the undisputed overall the living plagiarized guilty as charged i stole it all every consonant every vowel every word every sentence everything i see i feel i invent i write everything plagiarized from just a glimpse of you i am wonderfully, joyfully sick in love and you are everything i do guilty as charged all of it plagiarized

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 1/16/2018 1:27:00 PM

beautifully penned. I enjoyed reading this piece Armand.... Hope you feel better.

Seren Roberts

Date: 1/14/2018 7:54:00 PM

happy new year my friend......Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2018 1:40:00 AM

It was so good to hear from you today, Armand. I hope the new year will be good to you, my dear friend.

John Fleming

Date: 12/31/2017 1:46:00 PM

What I admire about you and your writing, Armand, above all else, is your plain, wide-open honesty...it is intrinsic to your nature; you wear it like you wear your heart: on your sleeve for the whole, wide-waking world to see - and you don't give a damn!! No wonder we all love and admire you! My very best wishes for your forth coming New Year, Armand...and my very best regards as always my friend - Cheers!! :) john

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/23/2017 2:41:00 PM

I have been away from you writing for too long. As always you are exceptional. Merry Christmas Armand.

Fj Thomas

Date: 12/18/2017 12:04:00 PM

I believe we are all guilty of this in some form or another Armand. This is very beautiful and unique. I do hope you find something to lift your spirit. :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/16/2017 12:12:00 PM

Wonderful Maurice sorry I'm so late to your party, congratulations for POTD honors...

Gary Bateman

Date: 12/15/2017 9:10:00 AM

Hello Armand, My Best Congratulations to you on POTD!! I do think that perhaps all of us are guilty too of this, in one way or another, but you've used the divine magnificence of your pen and the golden treasure of your thoughts to articulate all of these words in a truly meaningful way, full of your legendary wit, humor, and sense of wondrous enchantment. Very Well-Done!! A FAVE ABSOLUTELY!! Take Care of Yourself -- and Keep Writing Always!! Best Christmas Wishes, Gary

Indiana Shaw

Date: 12/14/2017 11:43:00 PM

Guilty as charged to have created such lyrics and such lyrics should bow in your presence of such a theft . . .

Amaarah Cajee

Date: 12/14/2017 10:36:00 PM

The pages on which you write are truly blessed, your descriptions are breathtaking. i absolutley love this.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/14/2017 7:27:00 PM

WoW! Armand, You have a way with your pen. The title alone caught my attention. And as I began to read I was drawn to every word and stanza. The repeated use of the word" I Plagiarized It All" was clever. I've never seen such a bold declaration of love quite like this. Excellent job. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. I wouldn't be surprised if it got honored poem of the week:-) Alexis

Paul Callus

Date: 12/14/2017 4:53:00 PM

You always deliver, Armand. Once again your pen has stayed faithful to you. This is a beautiful and expressive poem which retains your unique style of writing. Congratulation son POTD. ~ Best regards and good luck with your writing & directing. // paul

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/14/2017 1:39:00 PM

It's an awesome write Armand.. Congratulations on POTD... hugs and smiles :)

Eve Roper

Date: 12/14/2017 12:06:00 PM

Beautiful , Armand, congratulations on POTD. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2017 10:59:00 AM

and a POTD? WOW!!! Congrats. I enjoyed your sweet message to us all, by the way, and I pray you will not linger in depression.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2017 10:58:00 AM

OMG, stunning work from you, Armand. It's so true, every word we say has been used by someone, or it would not be a word. Every phrase has probably been said by someone else in history at one time or another. but ONLY YOU have put together in the exact manner the way you have aligned your lines to make up this wondrous poem birthed from your creative genius. FAVE

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/14/2017 8:06:00 AM

Wonderful and original! Thoroughly enjoyed! Congratulations on potd honours :) xomo!

Joseph May

Date: 12/14/2017 7:54:00 AM

Great write and a great ending...Congrats on POTD

John Lawless

Date: 12/14/2017 7:46:00 AM

So....if I steal this and....slip it under her pillow.....plagiarize.....a moment within a moment.....pilfer the beauty of her eyes, sift her sandy tresses thru my fingers, caress the aura of her skin, and lie about who wrote it.....DAMN THIS IS GOOD ARMAND......

James Swartz

Date: 12/14/2017 7:11:00 AM

Awesome idea and you wrote it perfectly. Every consonant and vowel and word and sentence was beautifully placed. Congratulations on POTD!

Maria Williams

Date: 12/14/2017 7:02:00 AM

Back with my congratulations for your POTD on this amazing write Armand, so well deserved....Maria

Silent One

Date: 12/14/2017 6:07:00 AM

Depression is a difficult thing to deal with and something so many do not understand, unless you have suffered from it.. my brother suffers very badly from it.. You seem to be doing the right thing in keeping busy, and only you understand your own soul.. Great poem, I think that many plagiarise, but dont even realise they are doing it.. Congrats on POTD.

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/14/2017 5:52:00 AM

I didn't see... Congratulations Maurice... Time for Celebrations

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/14/2017 5:50:00 AM

Life is plagiarized... Sending you positive vibes, Maurice...All the best for you and yours this season...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/14/2017 5:18:00 AM

- There are high numbers of depression in December month - Sorry for your sad feelings, Armand - A pleasure in your daily life: Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. - I wish you a peaceful and happy Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)