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I Miss You

I miss you like the sun just set I’m suddenly lost in the dark Reaching for your hand, its warm touch I miss you in this lonely place I’m suddenly lost in the dark There is only ice covered ground I miss you in this lonely place Slipping, falling, wanting you near There is only ice covered ground Reaching for your hand, its warm touch Slipping, falling, wanting you near I miss you like the sun just set Heidi Sands 2/12/20 Placed 4th in the Pantoum Poetry Contest. Theme: I miss you

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Date: 2/29/2020 12:31:00 AM
Heidi, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/29/2020 7:11:00 AM
Thank you Eve :)
Date: 2/13/2020 10:32:00 AM
Wow, this was wonderful Heidi. Such a beautiful poem of longing. Best wishes in the contest
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/13/2020 10:43:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend :)
Date: 2/12/2020 2:02:00 PM
- Lovely sentiment, Heidi :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2020 2:29:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/12/2020 1:49:00 PM
The first stanza spells the essence of your poem--all the right words--evocative. Best for a win, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2020 1:55:00 PM
Thank you Vijay! I appreciate your feedback and support :)

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