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I miss you like the moon misses the sun. And cry myself to sleep chasing a vanishing dream. Like the moon misses the sun I long to be with you. Chasing a vanishing dream obscured by the veil of death. I long to be with you, a grounded bird I want to fly. Obscured by the veil of death I need to see your face. A grounded bird I want to fly and leave all my worries behind. I need to see your face like the flower needs rain. And cry myself to sleep a grounded bird; I want to fly. I need to see your face, I miss you. (Pantoum) 02/09/2020

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Date: 2/10/2020 8:56:00 AM
You made a hard form flow like champagne.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/10/2020 9:22:00 AM
Thanks Richard, I appreciate your encouraging comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/10/2020 7:00:00 AM
Nice use of the repeated lines--they help to convey the sense of longing. Very soulful write :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/10/2020 9:21:00 AM
Thanks P.S., I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/10/2020 1:07:00 AM
Beautiful Pantoum.. Great entry in the contest Emile.. Good luck..
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/10/2020 9:21:00 AM
Thanks Jenish, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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