One Look

one look and i knew the attraction was fatal infatuation would grow into devotion and i’d never find a cure AP: 3rd place 2022 Submitted on May 19, 2021 for contest TANKA sponsored by M.L. KISER - RANKED 2ND and July 9, 2018 for contest TANKA IN 5 7 5 7 7 sponsored by THE POET DOCTOR

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/7/2021 5:10:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this creative work. Way to go. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2021 5:21:00 PM

wow, this is SO amazing. A fave for me!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2021 7:58:00 PM

Thank you very much, Andrea ~

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/4/2021 4:36:00 PM

Beautiful words and beautiful sentiment! Congrats on your win, Line! Blessings, Kim M

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2021 7:58:00 PM

Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated ~

Eve Roper

Date: 6/3/2021 3:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Line , in M.L Tanka poetry contest. Enjoyed reading. My warmest wishes. God bless you. <3

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/3/2021 7:53:00 PM

Thank you very much, Eve ~

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 6/3/2021 3:26:00 PM

Congratulations, Line, on your fine win! Carol Louise

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/3/2021 7:53:00 PM

Thank, Carol Louise ~ much appreciated

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/3/2021 10:05:00 AM

Very Creative. Congratulations!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/3/2021 2:54:00 PM

Thanks, Christuraj ~

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/3/2021 9:43:00 AM

So romantically creative Line! Love all the words that point us to "love sickness" that grows into a lifetime love. So well done. Congratulations on your win. Blessings!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/3/2021 2:54:00 PM

Thank you very much, Sam ~