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I Just Want To Tell You

I just want to tell you I love you so I just want to say I thrill to your touch I just want to say I'll not let you go I just want to tell you... You really should know you move men so much You really should know you make them say 'Whoa!' You really should know mere words are a crutch I just want to tell you... I just want to say you sashay, you flow I just want to say your essence is such A wondrous, sensuous delight to know I just want to tell you...

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/28/2019 6:53:00 AM

Nice refrain! The final verse hooked me...nice!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/29/2019 6:53:00 AM

I hope you read the roundel I wrote! It was fun to write! Thanks for inspiring me!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/28/2019 10:03:00 AM

Thank, Kim. The refrain is an underestimated weapon in the poet's arsenal. (Did I just write that? Am I awake yet? LOL). Ciao, gw

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/28/2019 4:35:00 AM

I may try a roundel. I do not believe I ever have! I like the cadence of this one.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/28/2019 10:01:00 AM

Try it, you'll like it -- as the old jingle used to ringle. :) gw

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 6/27/2019 4:51:00 PM

Get a hold of yourself, Wolf. Rise above it!) P.S.: Actually, it's nice and, holy rhymes, it's a roundel! I never wrote roundels. Sad but true(

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/27/2019 5:37:00 PM

Holy rhymes, Kurt, I'd never written a roundel either until yesterday... I'm just in a phase of trying out different styles... So, nothing to be sad about there, my friend. Vizha noz, komrade! ~ Volkov

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/27/2019 4:24:00 PM

Lovely, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/27/2019 5:36:00 PM

Thank you so much, Line. This roundel is now lovelier, thanks to your kind comment. :) gw