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I Have Lost You

I Have Lost You As I look at your photograph upon the wallA young handsome man with a smiling face Which of the happier times, I do then recallBut now gone forever in Gods eternal grace I have lost you You are in life, no more Indiana Shaw

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/11/2017 8:49:00 PM

So sad when people die young. Well penned though.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 8/6/2017 8:26:00 PM

A warm poignant heart felt poem. Indiana.

Gary Bateman

Date: 8/4/2017 4:23:00 PM

Hello Indiana, This short free verse of yours captures (for me) a riveting image of photograph on the wall that you're writing of. Great lead-off with this!! I've lived for a while and long enough to see photos of departed loved one and old friends with whom I can no longer talk and discuss things. I sometimes wonder what they might tell me if they could speak from the photo about what's gone on with them after all of the years since their departure. Enjoyed this one!! Cheers, Gary