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I Had a Thought

Had a thought the other day it just vaguely slipped away no footprints left, no scented trail my thought it seems had naught to say so it just vaguely, slipped away its lifelong dream was not to fail and yet my thought it lingers still with others, vaguely slipped away for thoughts are thoughts they have no will it couldn’t make the music play so it just vaguely slipped away that thought I had the other day. John G. Lawless ©3/5/2022

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Date: 4/7/2022 8:22:00 PM
I see that you really thought this one out, John... Seriously, so well presented. Excelsior! ~ Gershon
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Date: 4/6/2022 9:29:00 PM
Sad, your thoughts slipped away.... ! You could have bottled them up for occasional perusal or could have turned them into verse... specifying what they are instead of simply saying that the thoughts have slipped away :) :)
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