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I Had a Dream

Last night I had a dream The vision seemed real A box was delivered It was a heavy box It was addressed to me I wondered who sent it Returned address blurred I was unable to read it I took a knife to cut The tape from the box Slowly i opened the box I saw tissues paper Curious I wondered What was inside the box I began to remove The first tissues paper The box on the inside Was filled with tissues I could not see inside The box was misty I pondered what is was.

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 7/25/2022 7:07:00 AM

Hi Darlene, a box mystery, what was in the tissue paper? Are you going to let us know what is in the box? You could leave us guessing, of course. I hope not. Enjoyed this mystery write, my friend. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/25/2022 4:21:00 PM

Hello Mike, I could not see insde the box because it was misty. Yes I am going to do a part two. I got the title. Now waiting for the words to come so I can create the poem.I could keep you guessing. But i don't think so. Thank you Mike. My Monday was a good day spent. Hugs xx Darlene

Alkas Poetry

Date: 7/24/2022 4:35:00 AM

Once o sent a small pack tô a girl o lobed comyaining a bracelet jewl as a gift, o Didi NOT HAVE coragem tô deliver in person... imagine If It IS a good SURPRISE...! i Will wait the result kisses, salute alkas

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/25/2022 4:27:00 PM

Hello Alakas, It was a good idea to send the gift in the mail. It is a nice surprise for the person to receive it this way. You must have have been nervous. Yes it is a good surprise. Okay writing the 2nd half soon. XX Salute my dear friend. Darlene

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/24/2022 1:59:00 AM

Not a rattle snake I hope, or someones head, HA HA, SORRY DARLENEseen too many violent movies for I am mostly sitting afraid to do distances, so catching up on comments and Netflix, YOUR POETRY HAS CHANGED dARLENE, VERY SIGNIFICANTLY, YOU ARE DEVELOPNG AN awesome style! hUGS AND BLESSINGS, Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/24/2022 4:21:00 AM

Hello Jennifer, I am going to do a 2nd part to this poem. I do not know what is inside the box yet. Oh thank you Jennifer I try hard to work on my poems. It won't be a head of snakes inside the box. Hugs & Blessings Darlene

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 7/22/2022 10:39:00 PM

Hello, Mrs. Darlene, a wonderful poem! God bless you!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/23/2022 4:37:00 AM

Hello Mulu, thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.

Valsa George

Date: 7/22/2022 8:26:00 PM

Quite suspenseful ! I too wonder what might have been inside ! Dreams are often hazy and misty, sometimes baffling, sometimes leaving us thinking. Interesting read dear Darlene !

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/23/2022 4:39:00 AM

Hello George Valsa, Thank you for the wonderful comment. I can not stop to think what is inside the box. I am going todo a second part to this poem. Blessings my friend.

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/19/2022 8:53:00 AM

Some dreams are misty at first...but with persistence supported by faith...keep dreaming till clarity. Lovely write. Deep meaning. Reminding me to get back at work on a few of my own.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/19/2022 10:55:00 AM

Hello Joe DiMino, in my dream I see myself trying to see the inside of the box. The box is os misty it makes it hard to vision what is inside the box. Thank you for the lovely comment. I am going to do a part 2 of this poem. Blessings my friend.

Michael Tor

Date: 7/18/2022 9:42:00 AM

What was in the box Dear? Just tissue paper. Interesting write Darlene a true mystery of the tissue paper. God bless you hon...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/18/2022 10:16:00 AM

Hello Michael Tor, I do not know what was in the box. Inside the box was cloudy. So I did not see the image. I will let you know when I have that dream again. I am doing a part 2 of this poem. Thank you my dear friend.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/17/2022 8:40:00 PM

Maybe it was a late-arriving package from two years ago when tissues were so scarce! Remember. (I hear that the mail is backed up too). Happiness, gw

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/18/2022 4:11:00 AM

Hello Gershon, it could very well be a back up mail. Yes at that time the tissues paper was scarce. Thank you. Happiness to you as well.--Darlene

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/17/2022 7:55:00 PM

I love a mystery, Darlene. Mystery ignites curiosity and imagination. I enjoyed your poem a lot. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/18/2022 4:12:00 AM

Hello Evelyn, Thank you Evlyn, I am going to do a part 2 of this poem. Hugs.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/17/2022 7:16:00 PM

Fascinating write, I think. Quite elusive and fascinating, Love, Panagiota xxx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/18/2022 4:13:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, thank you Panagiota. xxxx Darlene

Bill Baker

Date: 7/16/2022 3:29:00 PM

I don't like dreams that leave me hanging. Let us know if you find out what's in the box Darlene. Nice engaging poe my friend. Hugs, Bill

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/16/2022 3:49:00 PM

Hello Bill yes i am doing a part 2 of this poem. In my dream I could not see what was in the box. i hope i have the same dream to find out. Hugs.

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/15/2022 8:08:00 PM

Yes i agree with the comment below, Darlene, can't wait for part 2, a scary dream though with a feeling, that you have created a mystery, which makes for good poetry.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/16/2022 4:05:00 AM

Hello Harry, Thank you for the lovely comment. Yes I will do a part 2 with this poem. Enjoy your day my friend.

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/15/2022 3:49:00 PM

Such a poet, Darlene. A well-crafted poem, we will be waiting for part 2 ( what's in the box. Blessings

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/15/2022 4:08:00 PM

Hello Lassad, I have no clue what is in the box. i am hoping to have that dream again to find out what is in the box. I will do a part 2 Blessings my friend.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/15/2022 3:17:00 PM

What a dream. Now you need to dream again to find out what is in the box. Part 2 poem. I will be waiting. Have a blessed day/weekend......................

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/15/2022 4:10:00 PM

Hello Paula, yes I am hoping to get the same dream then to find out wha\tr is in the bx. Yes a part 2 poem I will do. Thank you. Blessings . Enjoy your weekend.