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I Found the Following Information On a Secret Tablet That Foretells the F------G Future

DID YOU SAY CLOWN OR DROWN I aimed my eyes essentially to the east While trying to escape a beast I looked to the sanctimonious sea With waves intent on drowning me I heard some underwater creatures having a discussion And with every word I understood every repercussion They said there is a consequence to every action I consign While I relegate to yesterday that which used to be mine I had a staring contest with a blinding sun And to me it mattered not who lost or won I looked at my mast and realized it had cracked And at that moment I realized drowning was a matter of fact I looked behind to yesterday And didn’t care for what it had to say Over the years I’ve considered ashes or the graves But I never, for one moment, thought my headstone would be the waves © 2011.… Phreepoetree ~free cee!~

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Date: 6/10/2011 5:58:00 PM
Good plot could use some work with syllable count and meter..and title ;) give it a bit of polish! Light & Love
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