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I Finally Fell

I can’t believe her heart finally fell And got imprisoned in this tempting town, Love has glued me to a girl with a gorgeous gown Oh Carol has gotten me into this sensual spell. I’m addicted… like a snail can’t shed its shell She is now my queen; she won my colorful crown, In my pleasant palace she’s got no face to frown, She’ll be the golden bucket in my wealthy well. Our love will last forever… sweeter than vanilla, Our bond will remain bold, bright and beautiful We’ll always be lively and lovely in my virtuous villa. And our children will be cool, cute and colorful I’ll be her power, pole and pleasant pillar She’ll always be a wife that’s worthy and wonderful

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/25/2010 7:23:00 AM
Congratulations Adeleke on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Italian Sonnet". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/24/2010 9:50:00 PM
A very sweet FALLING in love poem, and Congratulations in the contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/24/2010 3:29:00 PM
Congratulations, Adeleke, on 9th place, in my Italian Sonnet Contest, with this beautiful poem.. love Constance
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