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I Felt You Feel...

And we stood there, together unknown, Standing hand in hand, but minds all lone. From the corner of my eyes I look at you, Straight into the eyes, as you always do. Lost in my thoughts I forget to blink; And i just keep observing as you drink. A drop of water run down your lip, My fingers upset, as desires take leap. I reach for the drop to wipe it down, And the touch of your lip, my senses aground. A spark of emotions engulfs us, The instant you shiver, we hear the ringing glass. Too late to react, too late to speak; The audience welcomes with claps and leaps. The moment was lost with the run of the flow, And i never could tell, and you never could know...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/11/2010 11:05:00 PM
Hey Vincel, thnx for reading and leaving comments on my piece...I appreciate it...Later, Jimmy
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Date: 10/1/2010 7:04:00 AM
True passion story. Well done
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Date: 10/1/2010 6:07:00 AM
What an excellent write enjoyed reading Vicel. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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