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I Fell For You

Do you remember the day When I was out on a bay And you, like the silent wind Penetrated deep in my rind Barefooted, you lured the carte Intruded the streets of my heart Even the dungeons rejoiced When you whispered in sweet voices As if a blessed rain just began to pore The Green couldn't help but restored For the first time in forever The door of my heart was unbarred The ocean of my heart was set on fire By your wide crescent smile My soul yearns for you Like sea waves for the moon You enticed the sails of my dreams They are floating towards your streams I wonder what's this magic I hope for you too it's aesthetic My smiles and peace are from you Be careful... let's rejoice... For now I love you too Dated: 25th September, 2021

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James Peranteau

Date: 7/27/2022 8:56:00 PM

sneaky title dear poet...snatch!...you reeled me in...i couldn't stop reading...and i don't like reading....lol Oh i like writing alright...yet the reading thingy...lol ;) Have a wonderful Summer...much love, james

Karen Jones

Date: 10/17/2021 5:34:00 PM

Engaging write

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/6/2021 10:48:00 AM

Very nice I enjoyed this. Well written :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/30/2021 9:21:00 AM

Pagunda, love this poem, your poems have become always one better than the last, yet all are breathtaking. So proud to have you as a friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/1/2021 11:01:00 AM

Hello Jennifer... You are back! I hope all was well at your end. And thank you very much for the lovely comment

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/29/2021 6:58:00 AM

Wow, this is truly wonderful poetry.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/1/2021 11:00:00 AM

Thanks Harry

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2021 11:21:00 AM

what beautiful romantic couplets xx

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/27/2021 11:53:00 AM

Thank you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/26/2021 10:24:00 AM

This is so sweet and charming. Very nice, Paghunda.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/26/2021 11:07:00 AM

I am glad you liked it.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/26/2021 8:03:00 AM

"the door of my heart was unbarred" what a great line, dear poet. I can see you have yours wide open when you write, thank you for sharing have a blessed day dear poet :)

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/26/2021 9:38:00 AM

Have a blessed day to you too... Thank you