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I Empty the Night, You Rise the Sun

I EMPTY THE NIGHT, YOU RISE THE SUN The dense darkness of the star starved night stayed petrified in stony niche of my mind bare, I kept accreting layers so long out of your sight until the time came for my passionate horizon to melt it in desolate night’s cauldron of despair that flowed searching a place in the heart of dawn, I found unveiled, lighted by the sun raised by you my nascent sky is colored in motif of your astral flair. The empty mind, now hued, grows wings of love new, a bird from depth of dark I fly in your shimmering air. June 10, 2018

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Eve Roper

Date: 6/30/2018 10:50:00 AM

Congratulations, Subimal, on your great 1st place win. love your imagery of your verse. Lovely poem Hugs Eve ~`*

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/1/2018 4:01:00 AM

Thank you, Eve for your nice comments.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 6/29/2018 9:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win, Subimal - blessings and best wishes for continued success, my friend! :-)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/1/2018 4:01:00 AM

Thank you, Greg.

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/29/2018 3:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win with this beautifully written poem. Enjoyed it. :)

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/29/2018 3:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win with this beautifully written poem. Enjoyed it. :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/1/2018 4:00:00 AM

Thank you, Susan.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 6/29/2018 1:22:00 PM

BIG CONGRATS.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/1/2018 3:59:00 AM

Thank you.

Lu Loo

Date: 6/29/2018 6:50:00 AM

absolutely loved this sweet Subimal, you rise the sun with this poem, thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement. Be blessed, -luloo :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/1/2018 3:59:00 AM

Thank you so much, Laura for the placement.