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I Dream a Day I Dream a Night

I dream a day With clouds at bay And sun shines bright To make things right Birds in the sky Taunt me to fly Take off in flight Soar to new height An inch a mile Charge just a smile Live to be free Roam not to flee Feel warm down deep Fear not to sleep Take a deep breath Think not of death I dream a night Where stars are bright My eyes in awe Find not a flaw My mind not flee Just think of me To slow it down With not a frown Gaze at the moon Glean far the loon Fear not a thing Hear my heart sing Soft and so faint This night I paint All now can cease A time for peace AP: Honorable Mention 2020, Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on June 19, 2020 for contest YOUR BEST POEM EVER sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON and February 3, 2018 for contest 128 WORDS sponsored by SILENT ONE - RANKED 2ND

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/17/2018 3:40:00 PM

So beautiful , Line. I see I came to it before, and I like it just as much this time.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/17/2018 6:20:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea, and do not ever hesitate to drop in again! LOL

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 2/15/2018 10:36:00 PM

Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, Line - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-)

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/15/2018 10:43:00 PM

Thank you so much, Gregory. Most appreciated.

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/6/2018 7:49:00 PM

Beautiful dreams of freedom and peace Line. Congratulations on your excellent win with your inspiring and wondrous poem. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/6/2018 9:28:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.

John Gondolf

Date: 2/6/2018 4:45:00 AM

Nicely written, Line, congrats on your win. John

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/6/2018 8:06:00 AM

Thank you, John. Much appreciated.

Probir Gupta

Date: 2/5/2018 11:39:00 AM

Congratulations on the win for this nicely done poem, Line ...

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/5/2018 12:48:00 PM

Thank you, Probir. Much appreciated.

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/5/2018 8:38:00 AM

Hi Line, Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/5/2018 9:04:00 AM

Thank you, Alexis. Much appreciated.

Sathya Babu

Date: 2/5/2018 6:22:00 AM

Congrats Line on this WIN.....I liked reading the day and night that you dream of in this poem. Regards, Sathya

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/5/2018 9:04:00 AM

Thank you, Sathya. Much appreciated.

Roy Pett

Date: 2/5/2018 6:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Line, really enjoyed reading your well written poem. :))

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/5/2018 9:05:00 AM

Thank you so much for your visit, Roy. Most appreciated.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 2/5/2018 12:47:00 AM

Congratulations, Line on your fine win.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/5/2018 9:05:00 AM

Thank you, Subimal. I appreciate your visit and comment.

Fj Thomas

Date: 2/4/2018 7:51:00 PM

What a beautiful dream. Thank you for letting me soar with you :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/4/2018 8:53:00 PM

Absolutely. Thank you so much for your visit and beautiful comment.

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 2/4/2018 7:38:00 PM

Congrats on a fine write and win Line!~Che :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/4/2018 8:53:00 PM

Thanks, Cheryl. Much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2018 7:34:00 PM

Line, you did a beautiful job with so few words to choose from. believe me, I researched a lot of words for this contest which closed out. haha(before i could even attempt it) and not many fantastic words are there to use!! BIG congrats on a well deserved win.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/4/2018 8:55:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. I'm sure you could have created something awesome. Just saving your inspiration for another day! Thanks for your visit.

Joseph May

Date: 2/4/2018 7:20:00 PM

Congrats on your win Line

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/4/2018 8:55:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph. Much appreciated.

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/4/2018 5:59:00 PM

Such lovely positive dreams, both day and night, Line. Beautifully expressed with such restricted use of words. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/4/2018 6:57:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra. Most appreciated.