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I Died Inside

when you left i died a little bit inside truth be told that’s not quite right it was more than a little you left a gaping hole a wedge inside my heart perpetual the dying an open wound that could never heal raw burning persistent obstinate tenacious inconsolable a relentless throbbing ache since you left little by little i died inside Submitted on May 5, 10, 2020 for contest BRIAN'S CHOICE 9 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST on February 6, 2019 for contest I DIED A LITTLE INSIDE sponsored by SILENT ONE

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Date: 5/11/2020 12:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win,Line--I imagine this was a tough poem to write....
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/11/2020 12:27:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely comment, LJ.
Date: 2/7/2019 10:44:00 PM
Well written, that guy needs to turn around and RUN back!
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Date: 2/7/2019 11:53:00 PM
LOL love your comment, Timothy.
Date: 2/7/2019 2:16:00 PM
It's startling the agony of loss; well and heartfully penned; good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/7/2019 11:53:00 PM
Thank you for your most appreciated visit and compliment, ML.
Date: 2/7/2019 4:22:00 AM
Fantastic Line, heartfelt, and profoundly true.
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Date: 2/7/2019 2:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Caren.
Date: 2/6/2019 10:29:00 PM
Terrific!
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Date: 2/7/2019 8:24:00 AM
Thank you, Timothy. Most appreciated.

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