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I Didn'T Hear You Leave

I didn't hear you leave. Where have you gone to? No door slam, no angry words, just a midnight flee to freedom. I didn't hear you leave. Did you tell me you were going? Did I miss it in the mayhem of life's confusion? You were with me on the same path - where did it split? Was I so preoccupied I didn't notice you take a different route? You're gone now. Silence and emptiness resound in the room. Empty coat hangers of finality clatter in the void of what was, then, before we separated, whenever it was the separation began. I didn't hear you leave. You went so quietly. No forwarding address, just emptiness - Where did you go?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/15/2008 4:59:00 AM
Congratulations Helen on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. You sure captured that empty and lonely feeling. Love, Shar
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Date: 7/14/2008 11:26:00 AM
Congratulations Helen on the featuring of your poem "I Didn't See You Leave." Touching write. Vince
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Date: 7/14/2008 6:20:00 AM
Helen, congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2008 4:52:00 PM
Helen this poem was very sad yet beautiful it seems sometimes in life we find ourselves lost and wondering what happened - I wish you the best - congrats on the feature
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