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i could have clung to you lord knows i wanted to i could have tried to clip your wings and bind you with imaginary strings i could have mesmerized you with a mermaid chant i toyed with the idea but decided i just can’t i could have begged and pleaded but it wasn’t what you needed i walked you down a celestial garden path knowing all too well i’d face alone the aftermath Submitted on May 2, 2021 for contest EMBRACE AND RELEASE sponsored by UNSEEKING SEEKER

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Date: 5/5/2021 1:25:00 PM
Nice poem m8. You should make rhyming poems. They rock. You also have a beautiful imagery
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Date: 5/5/2021 3:39:00 PM
Thank you, Mark. Much appreciated ~
Date: 5/5/2021 10:13:00 AM
Love this one, like so much of your poetry, I am touched and reverberating the feelings I fail to express. Thank you.
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Date: 5/5/2021 3:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, DM. Most appreciated ~
Date: 5/4/2021 8:51:00 AM
I love this "i could have mesmerized you with a mermaid chant i toyed with the idea but decided i just can’t" You are wise, Line.
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Date: 5/4/2021 8:48:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Caren ~
Date: 5/2/2021 3:39:00 PM
Good luck in the contest. I like your poem and thought you did a great job!
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Date: 5/3/2021 7:33:00 AM
Thanks, Leo. Much appreciated ~
Date: 5/2/2021 1:52:00 PM
Very effectively expressed. All the best for the contest. Thanks for your visit.;0)
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Date: 5/2/2021 2:41:00 PM
Thanks, Richard. Much appreciated ~
Date: 5/2/2021 12:36:00 PM
Extremely well written Line. I expect to see it on the winners list. Hoping you are well:)
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Date: 5/2/2021 2:41:00 PM
Thanks for your vote of confidence, Daniel ~
Date: 5/2/2021 11:57:00 AM
Brilliant, Line. I simply love this simple and enlightening write. It's such a clever write. Love it and sure its a winner. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 5/2/2021 2:42:00 PM
Thanks for your vote of confidence, Gina ~ much appreciated