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I Can Hear the Sound of Blue - Contest

I hear the sound of blue, It is the shallow hitched breathing I hear when my niece cries, It is the raindrops tink tinkling onto the window late at night, It is the soft, down sigh that escapes from my lovers lips. I hear the sound of blue. I hear the sound of blue, When I stretch early morning and hear the birds sing, I know the open expanse of blue sky will greet me. When I hear the soft call of the ocean within a shell, Or even hear the swish of the gentle waves. I hear the sound of blue. I hear the sound of blue, But I have never seen its color. Never seen the azure setting of the sky late at night, I have never watched the way blue paint stains hands, Or saw the light shining through topaz earrings. I have never seen the way blue blends across the sky in a rainbow, Nor seen the glow of blue within my own eyes. I can only imagine the sight of the Northern Lights, But I can hear, the sound of blue.

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Date: 1/18/2014 6:38:00 PM
this is so awesome. I think for me it is the best one I have read so far as I go down the winners' list. Love it. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 12/12/2013 7:55:00 PM
I wonder if this is how the blind perceive color. Interesting poem, Jay. Congrats!
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Date: 12/12/2013 11:45:00 AM
Way to go with winning blue..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 12/11/2013 8:35:00 AM
nive win Jay.....Linda
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Date: 12/10/2013 9:54:00 PM
This priceless gem reads like a sightless person's perspective on color...I can only imagine...The repeating lines at the first and last of each verse are EXTREMELY compelling and effective...Congrats to you Jay - Tim
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Date: 12/10/2013 9:50:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Jay
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Date: 12/10/2013 3:57:00 PM
an interesting take, not seeing but only hearing blue. I really liked your writing. Congrats for the win.
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Date: 12/10/2013 11:20:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in: "THE SOUND OF COLOR" contest: Sponsored by: Monterey Sirak - Nice to join and nice to read your poem Jay. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/10/2013 9:45:00 AM
Your descriptions of the sound of blue are amazing, and so descriptive. "hitched breathing" 'tink tinkling"...amazing. This poem drew me in. Congrats and thank you for entering.
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Date: 11/27/2013 10:22:00 AM
Jay Loveless, I love this poem in that you want to hear the sound of a color articulated in such a descriptive way almost like one hand clapping which is tough. GREAT WRITE!
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Date: 11/15/2013 2:18:00 PM
I hear the sound of you - pensive and rich awareness Jay - a masterful write - J.A.B. %
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Jay Loveless
Date: 11/19/2013 1:56:00 PM
Ahhh but my dear friend, I am not a color ;) Or am I? lol Thank you for your beautiful compliments
Date: 11/13/2013 7:40:00 PM
This piece is very impressive. If I were to have entered this contest, mine might have been similar. I like the style of your writing. :) good luck.
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Jay Loveless
Date: 11/19/2013 1:56:00 PM
Thanks! ^ ^ <3 I thought it turned out pretty well myself lol
Date: 11/13/2013 2:52:00 PM
I can deeply relate to these feelings. Though, I can say I have seen the azure skies while driving on an open highway. It was breathtaking. I highly enjoyed what you did here.
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Jay Loveless
Date: 11/13/2013 3:45:00 PM
Thank you very much

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