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I often bring my baby flowers, and ponder on what kind of mother I would have been. But I know that I would have been just great, my little boy would have grown up surrounded with love. The beauty of his childhood stolen, I will never see the man he would have been in life. I would have taught him all that I know, but would let him free to fly with his own wings and mind. When he crashed I would always be there, to pick up all the broken pieces and say, " be strong." Yes, I would have been a good mother, to this sweet little boy who never saw the blue sky. ______________________ October 14, 2017 Poetry/Free Verse/I, Mother Copyright Protected, ID 17-9495-43-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Best Free Verse Oct - Dec, 2017 sponsor, John Hamilton Fourth Place ______________________ Written for the contest, Parenthood sponsor, Silent One Second Place

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Date: 1/9/2018 11:04:00 AM
so sadly beautiful sweet Broken Wings, congrats lovely lady :)-luloo
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Date: 1/6/2018 6:50:00 PM
Straight to the heart. Wonderful poem well deserving of a win, BW.
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Date: 1/6/2018 9:06:00 AM
Very touching write Constance, I'm sure you would have been a great mother, your love shines through this write, congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 11/6/2017 7:18:00 AM
beautiful art Wings, congrats on your win...
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Date: 10/25/2017 8:11:00 PM
Blessings and congrats for your well-deserved win, Constance - keep up the wonderful work, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/23/2017 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Constance ...
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Date: 10/21/2017 5:59:00 PM
So very heartbreaking, Constance. You would have been a wonderful mother...your love and good heart show through your wonderful poetry. Congrats on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/20/2017 5:31:00 PM
Hi BW, Your heartfelt write brought tears to my eyes. In your poems we see your beautiful heart and I'm sure you would have been a wonderful mother. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/20/2017 4:28:00 PM
This is heartbreaking, I am sure you would have a wonderful mother.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/14/2017 12:20:00 PM
Broken Wings, you would have been a wonderful mom. Very heartfelt poem a winner already . Hugs Eve ~`*
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