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Christmas Eve- nineteen forty-three- I am only four years old. Christmas Eve! Santa is coming! The fresh-cut tree glistens with bubble lights, real tinsel, pretty glass balls- not much else. Mommy tells me Santa is coming to visit me- I was so very good all year! He is making a special trip- and tonight, before I go to bed, he will be here! My heart is so happy! Santa- coming to see me, and my baby brother! I am in my bedroom- putting slippers on. From my room, I see the door, ajar at my parent’s bedroom across the hall. My uncle is there! My Mommy and Daddy too. I didn’t see him come to our house! He puts on bright, red clothing with white fur- white hair and beard, black belt, boots, red cap. Santa is coming? Now, I sadly know- he really is not here. My heart sinks. I was only four- but I remembered this sadness that crushed my heart. Mommy and Daddy were so happy for me. That day, and for many years, I played their game- Santa is coming. November 23, 2014 Premiere Contest: Story From Your Childhood Sponsor: L Milton Hankins

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Date: 12/12/2020 8:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I have always said, anyone can be Santa. It is hard when a child finds out the truth. Enjoy your win with blessings................
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Date: 12/11/2020 11:34:00 AM
How sweet. Love how you wrapped up this story. The four-year old needing to play along~ awesome ending. Love it, Sandra.
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Date: 12/11/2020 4:10:00 AM
You were as smart and wise as a 4 year old as you are today (lol) Enjoyed this, Sandra.. you have a way of touching me with all your poetry. Congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Charlie
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Date: 12/10/2020 9:08:00 PM
Children are smart and they often play their part in grown up tales....Congrats on your win Sandra much love :)
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Date: 11/23/2014 8:02:00 PM
Wonderfully well-written memory, Sandra! I'm so sad for that 4-year-old little girl. That's a big secret for one so young. I really enjoyed reading your poem tonight...hugs, Rhonda
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/24/2014 1:01:00 PM
Hi Rhonda, thanks for your positive comment! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/23/2014 7:44:00 PM
What a wise little girl that you kept that secret to yourself, rather than disappoint your family. Perhaps we all remember when we first "discovered" the truth. love this poem !
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/24/2014 1:03:00 PM
Hi Carrie, thanks for stopping by. I have'nt thought about this incident in many, many years. But the word in the contest title, "hush," brought it back (although as a verb, and not as a noun), and just had to put that memory into words! Sandra

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