Humility

she travels miles to visit cousin also expecting child - humble ~*~ * * * * * * Note: #11 in series of 24 Monokus reflecting the holy season of Christmas! * * * * * * * * * * * *

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/23/2010 7:03:00 AM

gosh, I missed a lot of your series. I think I am getting close now to where I left off! Nice one here too.

Lynette Chachere

Date: 12/20/2010 4:58:00 PM

ohh(: sounds lovely. always great to be with your family. hope all is well Audrey. have yourself a merry christmas to everyone important to you. take care. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 12/17/2010 10:40:00 AM

Im not sure if it's the presentation of this poem or just the words you've chosen to tell the story with, but this is beautiful indeed! such a pretty picture!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/17/2010 8:21:00 AM

Very interesting way to define humility, Audrey

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/17/2010 1:30:00 AM

I think your monoku series is really inspiring, Audrey-- way to go with thinking of this-- hugs nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2010 9:06:00 PM

very nice, Audrey. You are reminding us step by step of the Christmas story small details. About Kia, she is a bit plain yet classy looking. If only she had a convertible top, I could easily love her. haha. Luv, Andrea

James Peranteau

Date: 12/16/2010 6:07:00 PM

This has to be the most awesome Monoku yet ! much love, james

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/16/2010 1:30:00 PM

Is this the journey Mary was undertaking, Audrey? Such a beautiful monuku that speaks not only of humility by deep devotion and love. So glad you are sharing these inspirational monokus with us, dear! Love, Carolyn

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 12/16/2010 1:24:00 PM

A mothers care