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How Will I Find You

Fire In my heart Burns so bright Yearning to embrace Your loving sight Every lonesome moment I think of you Every restless night I'm missing you And I say it's really true Only a blessed few find love like you Please tell me my love, how will I find you I am here now In this empty house To tell you I was wrong I am here now To tell you I belong I am seeing anew Things I barely knew Of heavenly befall And you own them all You are one of a kind Life rarely finds Let me tell you sweetheart You own my mind It's been a while Since I saw your smile I'm desperate now To hear your voice Let me surrender To a brand new start As I give you the reigns To rule my heart Fire in my heart Burns so bright Yearning to embrace Your loving sight Every lonesome moment I think of you Every restless night I'm missing you And I say it's really true Only a blessed few find love like you Please tell me my love, how will I find you First place November 11, 2017 The Fire Inside Sponsor: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver Placed 1st: Strand select R contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 6/27/2022 10:16:00 PM
Your poem is throbbing with love, Vijay . Due to some misunderstandings the lovers drifted away, but now deeply sorry that they are not together. Here we see the intense longing of one for the other. Your poem beautifully recounts the heartbreak and the decision to begin love afresh.
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Date: 2/18/2020 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and read. Have a wonderful day.......
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Date: 11/30/2017 10:11:00 PM
Congratulations! First place. Not surprising, however. Great write!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/30/2017 10:43:00 PM
Thank you Rhoda.
Date: 11/18/2017 7:45:00 PM
wow, first place. a BIG congrats to you, Vijay. A well deserved win.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/19/2017 6:53:00 AM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 11/16/2017 9:28:00 PM
Congratulations Vijay, its not hard to see why this won first place. It is beautiful...Maria
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 7:14:00 AM
Thank you Maria!
Date: 11/14/2017 12:35:00 PM
Such a beautiful, lyrical poem, Vijay. So romantic and soulful. This poem has Icarus wings ... your pen has been flying too close to the sun. It burns w/intense expressions of love. Pure pulsar poetry. It beats w/a celestial heart. Love and many more blessings of love.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 7:14:00 AM
Thank you Freddie!
Date: 11/14/2017 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations Vijay! Beautifully said.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/14/2017 12:22:00 PM
Thank you Frances!
Date: 11/14/2017 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations Vijay! You are a real poet. Beautifully said.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/19/2017 6:54:00 AM
Thanks Frances!
Date: 11/14/2017 4:46:00 AM
Beautiful write, Vijay, congrats on your well-earned win, friend. Blessings! :-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/19/2017 6:53:00 AM
Thanks Greg!
Date: 11/13/2017 10:49:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/14/2017 12:22:00 PM
Thank you Joseph!
Date: 11/13/2017 9:46:00 PM
Congrats, Vijay. Wonderful poem.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/14/2017 12:22:00 PM
Thank you Line!
Date: 11/13/2017 5:38:00 PM
So lovely nd full of emotion, Vijay! CONGRATS! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/14/2017 12:21:00 PM
Thank you Janice!
Date: 11/13/2017 5:28:00 PM
I Love your song Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/14/2017 12:21:00 PM
Thank you Chuck!
Date: 11/13/2017 3:48:00 PM
Congratulations Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/14/2017 12:23:00 PM
Thank you Heidi!
Date: 11/13/2017 3:30:00 PM
Excellent Vijay, much enjoyed :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/14/2017 12:23:00 PM
Thank you Gary!
Date: 11/12/2017 8:42:00 PM
So beautiful and sorrowful - I absolutely love this!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2017 9:45:00 PM
Thank you Elena!
Date: 11/12/2017 5:09:00 PM
Fiction but what friction Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2017 5:45:00 PM
Thank you Jean!
Date: 11/12/2017 3:33:00 PM
But I'm always here... Lol! JK, but wow, this is beautiful! I love it! Hugs and smiles :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2017 4:59:00 PM
Thank you Akkina...welcome back!
Date: 11/12/2017 8:43:00 AM
Fiction, but such a beautiful poem...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2017 11:53:00 AM
Thank you Silent One!
Date: 11/12/2017 6:57:00 AM
This is a very nicely penned lyric, you have pleased me by your awesome skills this morning...you are a skillful poet, not just in this form but in many different ones! I enjoy reading your lovely pieces, Great work!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2017 7:12:00 AM
Thank you Russell!
Date: 11/12/2017 6:03:00 AM
Excellent. Very nice and lovely lyrics. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2017 7:11:00 AM
Thank you Ravi!
Date: 11/12/2017 5:58:00 AM
Well written Lyric for a beautiful song Vijay. Good luck in the contest :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2017 7:11:00 AM
Thank you Heidi!
Date: 11/11/2017 10:44:00 PM
A lovely and heartfelt song of heartbreak and lost love Vijay. Enjoyed! Good luck in the contest!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2017 7:10:00 AM
Thank you Susan!
Date: 11/11/2017 9:54:00 PM
Very nice lyrics Vijay..best wishes
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2017 7:09:00 AM
Thank you Joseph!
Date: 11/11/2017 8:58:00 PM
Wonderful write, Vijay, luck in the contest. Hugs Eve~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2017 7:09:00 AM
Thanks Eve!

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