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In love's last days two foolish hearts must bleed when faced with flames that callously will die, an agony that this will not succeed, a feeling that this too will go awry. How many mortal insults to the soul can each alone withstand or even bare with backs and shoulders turned away so cold as if another presence isn’t there. And then they speak the words that tear apart that tell you just how much they hate you so. Yet looking deep inside this foolish heart, you see the other factors in their woe. In all this pain, resides two selfish minds repeating love’s heartbreak so many times.

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Date: 2/22/2021 5:47:00 PM
Very very nice! M.
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Date: 2/21/2021 1:39:00 PM
"Selfish minds" sums up the state of affairs in many marriages, Janis. When we endure "mortal insults to the soul," we are often in a place of no return. Love really is heartbreaking. Some of us are afraid to try again. You're a great writer, Janis. Excellent work here! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 2/20/2021 6:32:00 PM
This is a wonderful sonnet, Janis. Sad and heartbreaking, and yet perfectly crafted. Congratulations to you!
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Date: 2/20/2021 8:41:00 AM
Janis, congratulations on your win in Craig's Foolish Heart contest with this wonderful poem _Constance
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Date: 7/8/2020 6:56:00 PM
"Too many" would be my answer to your question. Your sonnet is marvelous, in its trajectory from the hurt caused by losing love, then insults and hate, to a really wonderful turn of events, forgiveness. You have captured so well the essence of the Pope quote, dear poetess. Delighted to read this today. Take care, my friend ~ John
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Date: 2/9/2020 3:01:00 PM
I could swear I commented on this beauty but don't see my comment. A well deserved Second Placement my friend! Congratulations! xxoo
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Janis Thompson
Date: 2/10/2020 11:13:00 AM
Thanks Connie.
Date: 2/9/2020 8:49:00 AM
- I like how you took this line on in your poem, Janis ... excellent - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 2/10/2020 11:14:00 AM
I appreciate your comment.
Date: 2/9/2020 6:31:00 AM
the human heart bleeds many times, because we are only human and humans will always err... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Janis Thompson
Date: 2/10/2020 11:15:00 AM
Maybe it should stop being pierced so many times. Time to heal. Thanks for the placement. Contests are challenging,

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