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Hot Summer Ecstasy

Chocolate cake batter still on my tongue, I rush outside as soon as I hear the clamor It’s a hot summer day in the city Fire hydrant busted, water rushing everywhere No need for swim suits, its time to cool off Mama keeps calling, take off your shoes! The sun is bright, the news has spread From blocks away, they come It won’t last forever, everybody knows Nothing to hear but high pitched squeals, Arms flailing, heads drenched as we jump No pools around here, this is it, liquid heaven All too soon, the sirens are blaring Kids scatter as laughter abates Flashing lights call a halt to summer ecstasy As I climb back up the fire escape Mama yells, have fun? and the oven promises Chocolate delights 8/28/17

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Date: 9/18/2017 6:33:00 PM
congrats Mike!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/19/2017 9:44:00 AM
Thanks Jack!
Date: 9/18/2017 2:50:00 PM
Congratulations Mike ! :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/18/2017 2:53:00 PM
Thanks Heidi
Date: 9/17/2017 5:49:00 PM
Thank you, Mike , for entering my contest. You made me hungry with this poem, I saw the children having fun in this poem :) .... Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/18/2017 7:33:00 AM
Thanks Eve, the subject picture was great and such a reminder of simpler times.
Date: 8/30/2017 12:40:00 AM
Love it!
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Date: 8/29/2017 6:36:00 PM
Let's all jump in - let our inner kid out!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/29/2017 7:50:00 PM
I'm with you Sunlite!
Date: 8/29/2017 2:51:00 PM
This fun poem seems familiar , as if I saw it before Mike. I enjoyed this and it ended with the comfort of chocolate delights :) Nice!
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Date: 8/29/2017 2:18:00 PM
A lovely childhood reminisce - nothing better than a burst fire hydrant to wet up an appetite of such sweet delights . . . ; )
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/29/2017 2:41:00 PM
Thank so much, Indiana

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