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The good ol' days of summer fun On city streets beneath the hot sun The streets become rivers where kids play In years gone by on a hot summer day The kids are all smiles in their river of fun On city streets beneath the hot sun Where memories are framed in black and white And the cool water brings them delight No lifeguard to save them from the depth of their fun No cars in sight where their river runs They'll swim in these memories in summers to come Remembering the good ol' days, of summer fun Other kids look on from the "river banks" Where tall buildings reach for the sun For this river of joy they'll give thanks In the good ol' days of summer fun -- 8/24/17 Contest: Hot Summer Day Contest Judged on: 9-17-17 -------------------------------------------------------------------- For Broken Wings Contest: A Poem, I Wrote and sent Drifting

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Date: 10/13/2017 5:10:00 AM
Blessings and heart-felt congratulations on your win, Joseph - wonderful work and well-earned, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/13/2017 5:24:00 AM
Thank you Gregory
Date: 10/12/2017 8:28:00 AM
Returning with congrats, Joseph!
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Date: 10/13/2017 5:24:00 AM
Thank you Vijay
Date: 10/12/2017 7:54:00 AM
A lovely write! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/13/2017 5:23:00 AM
Thank you Modupe
Date: 10/11/2017 9:00:00 PM
Joseph congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Joseph May
Date: 10/13/2017 5:27:00 AM
Thank you so much for my placement Broken Wings
Date: 8/25/2017 5:40:00 PM
you really excelled with the theme and picture given, Joseph. GREAT job!
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Date: 8/25/2017 7:42:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 8/25/2017 1:13:00 AM
Now, you've described it best, Joseph:)
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Joseph May
Date: 8/25/2017 5:55:00 AM
Thank you Jo
Date: 8/24/2017 9:44:00 PM
Well done Joseph..good luck for the contest!
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Date: 8/25/2017 5:55:00 AM
Thank you Vijay
Date: 8/24/2017 8:22:00 PM
The good ol' days when you actually played outside and went home dirty and wet from all the fun. A very nice poem Joseph...hugs :)
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Joseph May
Date: 8/24/2017 9:02:00 PM
Thank you Akkina...
Date: 8/24/2017 8:22:00 PM
ah, the good ol days, how I wish for them, this was a great write!
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Joseph May
Date: 8/24/2017 9:00:00 PM
Thank you Arthur
Date: 8/24/2017 7:06:00 PM
Excellent Joseph. I love the line, no life guard to save them from the depth of their fun. It brings the reader right into it. Good luck in the contest :)
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Joseph May
Date: 8/24/2017 9:00:00 PM
Thank you Heidi
Date: 8/24/2017 6:49:00 PM
a perfect interpretation of the picture Jospeh:-) I love the fun imagery:-) hugs Jan xx
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Joseph May
Date: 8/24/2017 6:51:00 PM
Thank you Jan...

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