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Honeysuckle Promise- Haiku Triology

gentle evening breeze honeysuckle perfumed air promise of summer inhale of sweetness floral scent of paradise memories linger stars sparkle down smiles fullness of what is to come moment eternal Eileen Manassian Ghali It was a warm evening. I had just come back from the office. I got out of the car and the scent of honeysuckle enveloped me in magic. It was one of those moments, that you can't describe....so rich...so...full of promise and life....a moment where you are lead to believe that the world is beautiful, the universe close, and eternity in your grasp. This scent brings with it memories. I was filled with bliss. I don't usually do haiku...but...here it is. I hope you enjoy it! Hugs

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/22/2014 11:30:00 AM

I love these. Thank you for them. Happy writing and God bless you.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/1/2014 3:15:00 PM

I know well the feelings you convey here. The smell/ aroma just takes you in. It just gives you a "free" feeling :) I'm glad you liked my The Dancer " poem.

Richard D Seal

Date: 3/24/2014 6:40:00 PM

I once had this honeysuckle grow all over my garden shed, boy does it go wild, somewhat like you my little Desert Orchid lol. I must say well done on this, haiku not really my thing, but you have made this wondrous. Take care, Richard

Richard D Seal

Date: 3/24/2014 6:39:00 PM

Skat A

Date: 3/20/2014 2:20:00 PM

Amazing haiku ~SKAT~

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/20/2014 8:29:00 PM

HEY, SKAT!!! Thanks for stopping by! :) Loved your post!

Ken Carroll

Date: 3/19/2014 1:30:00 PM

A lovely spiritual nature write!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/19/2014 1:36:00 PM

:) Yes....nature speaks to me...so much beauty, Ken. All we can do is drink it all in and be grateful that we are alive. Thanks for the visit.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/19/2014 11:12:00 AM

you scent these 'ku with your special brand of poetic flavor... enticed, eileen!.. huggs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/19/2014 1:36:00 PM

Awwww...Nette...You are SWEET!!! :) THANK YOU!!!! HUGS HUGS HUGS

Painted Hunter

Date: 3/19/2014 10:37:00 AM

Look at you crankin' out the haikus! I like them, Eileen....and the scent of honeysuckle is very familiar to me...brings good memories and the thought of spring...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/19/2014 1:34:00 PM

Caleb...your words are a boost to my morale! :) Thank you....Yes...strange how a scent can mean so much. I spent eight years of my life in Iran, before the revolution. I can honestly tell you...I lived in paradise. We had a beautiful compound..on the foot of the Elbruz mountain range...Beautiful trees...weeping willows, walnut, mulberry, apple, apricot, cherry, plum. Such luscious fruit. We had pool...in summer, we wouldn't wear clothes. We'd just pull on our swimsuits and swim the day away...the feel of grass under my feet...squished mulberries. Scents bring images, memories, feelings. Honeysuckle is an undefinable...I just remember...sweetness...goodness of life...of being alive

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/19/2014 9:04:00 AM

Hello Eileen, off to read som of the comments on your blog.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/19/2014 12:44:00 PM

;-)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/18/2014 2:51:00 PM

Moments like this we scent life and beauty and harmony! We become an indivisible part of creation and are ready to shout THANK YOU OH LORD THAT I AM HERE! Phantasmagoric trilogy that touches all levels of our existence, dear Eileen! A 7!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/18/2014 3:06:00 PM

WOW! I thank you kindly, my dear poet. You are very kind to give me a 7, but I do appreciate your graciousness! :) Yes...Thank you Lord that I am here! Amen! :) Thank you for visiting me today.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/18/2014 6:24:00 AM

very excellent haiku's Eileen you should do more love the flow and the scent of honeysuckle is wonderful hugs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/18/2014 7:32:00 AM

Oh....Shadow!!! My haiku form is the hardest to work with. I've done some in the past that weren't up to standard. I'm SO glad to receive this commendation from you on them! :) I'm glowing. Thank you, my dear! hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/18/2014 12:32:00 AM

I might not be able to describe it but you certainly did. Bravo Eileen. Hugs Rick.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/18/2014 7:33:00 AM

Bravo suits me just fine, dear Richard. Thank you! Oh...BTW...I have a new blog up. I'd love it if you had a look see! IF you've got some time on your hands. Thanks! :)

Honestly J.T.

Date: 3/17/2014 7:41:00 PM

Well done Eileen

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/18/2014 3:06:00 PM

:) Awwwww....SWEET! :)

Honestly J.T.
Date: 3/18/2014 10:49:00 AM

Yes

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/18/2014 7:33:00 AM

JT!!!!! So good to have you here! I'm glad you like it! :) Is that PAPA with ya! Lovely!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2014 7:04:00 PM

oh my, it is so lovely. You and I are sometimes on the same wavelength, dear. I have written of this theme using honeysuckles before!! It's great to be so inspired as you were when you thought of this.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/18/2014 7:34:00 AM

Really? ME on the same wave length with Andrea D? Are you kidding me? I'm tickled PINK! :) Thanks, my dear. Yes...it was such a lovely evening....I just drank it all in....Yup...Spring and summer will follow each other in quick succession in this part of the world. Thanks for stopping by! Hugs

Leon Wilson

Date: 3/17/2014 4:20:00 PM

A beautiful haiku Eileen all three I can't wait for summer now so I can get my shorts and flip flops on lol.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/18/2014 7:38:00 AM

:) Yes, that would be lovely to be able to feel the sun! Thanks for stopping by to visit. I do appreciate it! :)

Paul Callus

Date: 3/17/2014 4:08:00 PM

Well, what can I say! You said it all. Beautiful haiku, all three of them. So much promise...and yet, so much giving! // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/18/2014 7:42:00 AM

Always a joy to have a visit from you, Paul. :) I'm glad you liked this little piece. Hugs

Tim Smith

Date: 3/17/2014 4:00:00 PM

This trilogy is as beautiful as your memory of this evening......Tim

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/17/2014 3:01:00 PM

Nice triple dose of warm weather haiku. It snowed one more time here in New Jersey while spring is only four days away. Good write Eileen.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/17/2014 3:07:00 PM

:) Yes, we have had an unusually warm winter. No snow for the ski resorts to open. Last week we had a deluge of rain...People flocked to the mountains to catch a glimpse of snow. I feel with you all! Snow is nice...in the right amounts! :)

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 3/17/2014 2:23:00 PM

What's Not To Enjoy About Your Beauty's Poetry, Sweet Beautiful Elaine ~ Magical As Enchanting Permeating One's Senses With Her Paragon's Pleasing, Perfumed Dew ~ I'm Going To Flavour As Favour Yes, Beauty's Poetic Petals, Her, Honeysuckle Rose ~ My Love, Always & Forever, John

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/17/2014 2:25:00 PM

This is sweet as the honeysuckle scent! Thanks ever so much, Johnny!