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Hollow People

HOLLOW PEOPLE
I swim in calm water shallow, furrow foaming trail in the wake. In ardent earnest I follow the true course I set for my sake. Out of confused turbulent zone I swim in calm water shallow. Filled with joy reach the shore I own, you float like logs from land fallow. Empty minds bloat, make false halo, don’t see glow of deep perception. I swim in calm water shallow, don’t drown to depth of deception. Tune of my heart’s rhythm I can’t share with you, heartless people hollow, you beat void drums loud, I don’t hear, I swim in calm water shallow.
June 11, 2018 Syllable count : 8 each line (Checked on howmanysyllables.com)

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Date: 6/11/2018 5:55:00 AM
Very nice Quatern ..Gl in the contest
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/13/2018 1:41:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph.
Date: 6/11/2018 5:46:00 AM
This is excellent Subimal. I love the last stanza! :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/13/2018 1:41:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi.

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