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Holidays - Cinqku

HOLIDAYS-- Cinqku Midnight black Friday turkey burping tryptophan tornado red ink Church bells echoing remembrances disturb the secular - rebirth John G. Lawless 11/9/2014 submitted - Dr. Ram Mehta – Cinqku Poem – Poetry contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2014 11:09:00 AM

you used very intelligent thinking and vocabulary, which made this one of the very best in my opinion. Congrats in the contest.

John Lawless
Date: 12/14/2014 5:11:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, comment appreciated, always nice to hear from you.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/11/2014 8:31:00 PM

Great contrast John. Congratulations on your win

John Lawless
Date: 12/14/2014 5:10:00 PM

Thanks Brenda

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/11/2014 4:30:00 AM

Congrats on awesome winning write John! First place in my view, a perfect 7, hv a blessed day!

John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2014 6:04:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Sharma for your high praise.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/10/2014 9:26:00 AM

Excellent contrasting images between the two stanzas, John. #7 Congratulations on a deserved podium finish! // paul

John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2014 6:04:00 PM

Thanks Paul, the contrast of the spiritual and the secular around Christmas has always set me thinking.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/10/2014 5:49:00 AM

beautifully penned - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx

John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2014 6:03:00 PM

Thanks Jan always nice to hear from you.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/10/2014 5:29:00 AM

I enjoyed your Cinkqu poem and happy to congratulate you on your win,John

John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2014 6:02:00 PM

Thanks again Dr. Mehta.