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Hold My Love- Psalm

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Love is the cure for all… Poverty, hunger, and war, Though we stumble and fall… His love is there for us to explore. It’s not about how much we give… But how much love we put in the giving, We have room to always forgive… Transgressions among the living. He will hold our love forever… Until the Heavens swallow time, His loving heart will not sever… With all the sorrows we must climb. The Lord hears our pensive prayers… On Angel’s wings toward the pearly gates, I know our spirit needs repairs… Hold my love as Heaven waits. Sept.22.2019 Write a Psalm Sponsored by: Regina Riddle Placed 1'st...Thank You

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Date: 9/27/2019 12:22:00 PM
Truly, I love the insight in your psalm. I agree that it's not how much we give, but the love in our hearts that makes us want to give. Many beautiful lines (and amazing photos as well). Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 9/27/2019 9:39:00 AM
Beautiful, congrats.
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Date: 9/27/2019 4:50:00 AM
- Congratulations W.W. on your beautiful winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/27/2019 12:30:00 AM
I am very happy to see this gem in First Place WW, where it deserves to be! Congratulations my friend! : ) xxoo
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Date: 9/26/2019 10:34:00 PM
Congrats on a wonderful poem. God bless you always.
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Date: 9/26/2019 9:12:00 PM
Back with congrats on a great win!
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Date: 9/24/2019 8:02:00 PM
My dear bro bro, the truth and beauty of your psalm moves me deeply. Brilliant and inspiring poetry from your talented pen. I'm sure this will place high.. love and hugs, your sane sissy <3
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Date: 9/24/2019 4:00:00 PM
Super, W.W. I especially like the part about forgiveness. G.L. in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 9/24/2019 1:31:00 PM
This is so beautiful WW! Love is the only truth to find for seekers of happiness and a peaceful world. So incredibly and brilliantly composed! It is sure to place high. I love the pictures as well. xxoo
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Date: 9/23/2019 11:00:00 PM
A beautiful psalm beginning with your opening line ~ good luck!
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Date: 9/23/2019 1:55:00 PM
A beauty of a psalm, my friend! We fold under much pressure when we think about life’s struggles. There is one who can handle all!
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Date: 9/23/2019 12:01:00 PM
How much love we put in the giving, great line full of meaning. Very nice WW, enjoyed the sentiment in this write, hope it does well!
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Date: 9/22/2019 1:13:00 PM
I agree... well said..
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Date: 9/22/2019 12:52:00 PM
Lovely psalm, W.W. Can't go wrong with these sentiments. Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 9/22/2019 11:32:00 AM
Well that settles it I guess I will have to drop out of this contest, excellent W.W.
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Date: 9/22/2019 1:30:00 PM
Perhaps you can place between 1'st & 2'nd...after me, of course, lol...come on Bobby wheres the spirit...^WW^ :o)

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