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Hit the Ground 3-1-10

its hard to breath, but im doing it, cant let you see, that i might not be "okay" the first time ill ever lie to you, might just begin today, breath baby breath, as the rain falls down, breath baby breath, or i might just fall to the ground... its hard to sleep, so i lie awake at night, cant let you see, that it hurt me today inside, to see you flirting with another girl, when im still stuck on you as my world, breath baby breath, as the rain falls down, breath baby breath, before you fall face first on the ground... its hard not to cry, but i hold it back, cant let you see, that my heart has snapped, cant let you know, that im dieing inside, all i can say is i love you goodnight, breath baby breath, before you drowned, breath baby breath, dont hit the ground...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/2/2010 1:43:00 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen.. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/2/2010 12:01:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this Rain. Keep writing as it's one way to let go. Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 3/2/2010 11:55:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Rain. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2010 11:35:00 AM
dang. chilling repetition. Good write, there hun. :D --- Mike Ruff
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Date: 3/2/2010 7:47:00 AM
rain this is really really good i loved it, it was pretty sad but i really liked it it was almost like a song. Jo
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